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Concept Art/Composition
By RaphaelleDae
Vampire Visit
this is still work in progress, but can you guys critique my composition? I only used one layer for this to get that painterly effect. I also miss painting traditionally . I wanted to use the curtain to symbolize the blood flowing from her neck, and the vampire calmly resisting his thirst. Should I zoom it out a bit or this is okay?
2 weeks ago
2
11d
Here is a project I've been working on could use feedback
Here is a project I've been working on could use feedback regarding composition and composition basics that I could work on.
2 weeks ago
2
14d
How should I compose words in my art?
By Judah Rojas
I drew this robot, but when I finished, I noticed that the Japanese characters were basically unintelligible. For future reference, how should I put words in a piece?
1 month ago
1
1mo
Ink drawing and line weight
By Judah Rojas
Hey, I don't know if this is the right place to post this, but I thought I should try here.
I really love just free drawing with ink and pens. There's something about putting a permanent line down and having to fix it if you mess up, rather than just redrawing your pencil outline. But I really struggle with line weight! I can't find a way to make the main figure pop from the background. Does anyone have any advice?
I really like how the moose is dark, but I can't seem to keep the owl from blending into the background.
3 months ago
3
3mo
Critique
By Udhay Singh
This is the object study I did in my art college I have been only doing shading for 2 weeks straight cause I got into college but didn't do any practice beforehand so I'm very behind others
Please critique this because I am too shy to ask for advice the marked one is mine did I do right or wrong for making it pure white
4 months ago
0
4mo
Is this composition working..?!
By Arbër R.
Working on an illustration for an ongoing set of illustrations related to a story I call AXR2120.
In AXR2120 humanity has reached a world that exhibits a phenomena where their underlying inner monsters can exist alongside them and are manifested as a variety of giant creatures in the physical plane.
For this illustration I am concerned about scale in the composition: I am wondering if the scale ratio of man to inner monster is portraying the phenomena well... what are your thoughts?
9 months ago
4
9mo
Tips for Illustration idea?
By Venus Gate
Hello prokoers ;)
I will do an illustration traditionally and then digitally, I want to do a knight with a big sword, breastplate and shoulder plates standing in front of an entrance.
Wich of these poses do you think is best? Should I explore more, any tips?
10 months ago
3
10mo
Need feedback
Hello everyone I was given a task
To make a poster for a bad art club
And was given the following two images
As refference so in the third image I made the poster I took the style of the fonts like thick strokes and fill from the refference and just made an illustration at the background to make it different from the first two posters because I wanted to do something different this time also I have less experience in creating posters so can anybody give me feedback for it and thank you
10 months ago
1
10mo
What are the different ways to compose
By Dennis Yeary
I’m looking for a list of different ways to compose a drawing to the right message. Like rules of thirds Fibonacci sequence and others. Also what purpose for each of the techniques if possible
1 year ago
0
1yr
Which one looks more impactful or balanced?
By Cia
Hi, everyone! I need some feedback on this digital art piece I made recently. I gave it 2 backgrounds but I am unsure how balanced the pieces seem overall and which is better. Any feedback is welcome! Thank you!
1 year ago
3
1yr
How to plan out a dynamic scene using perspective
By mostafa deif
I really need a course with lots of examples on how to build up a scene from scratch using perspective but not the basic stuff 1,2,3 point perspective to draw a simple scene but how to draw a dynamic scene like in comics with correct perspective
1 year ago
6
1yr
Composition without a backgound
By Marie Soubré
Hello Everyone!
This is my first post I'm honored to come to you for some advices.
I'm here to progress with my drawing, specifically anatomy, inking and composition.
I'd like to know your point of view on (full body) characters placed in empty space (no backgound) and the way to make the final picture more composed and dynamic.
Backgrounds are not my cup of tea but I try to incoporporate them more often. Sometimes I feel that it is not needed, however, when I look back at my drawings I think that something is missing with most of them. I try to respect global composition rules within the character and its props but I guess this is not enough.
Here's some example from my personal gallery (some have backgrounds, some didn't).
Thank you very much in advance for your help, you're the best!
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1 year ago
3
1yr
My Composition Bootcamp Starts Saturday
Hi Proko People!
If you want to develop your composing skills with me this summer, spend twelve weeks (June, July & August) in a rigorous schedule of exercises, prompts, and projects to build your creativity and design strengths.
You can read more at the "Composition Bootcamp" link on my home page: https://www.marshallart.com/HOME
We just finished a three-month round and it went well enough for several students to take it a second time. I hope for this summer to be the best of all, and to see you there!
Marshall
1 year ago
15
1yr
Composition for Dynamic Foreshortening (One Piece Fanart)
By Caleb Arias
Hello everyone, I want to make a fanart of Luffy Gear 4 Bound Man!
But I want to give it that wild and dynamic touch, like @itokazuuuu's drawings or like boichi, giving them a final rendering in graphite.
But my sketches look very loose in composition, what can I do to make them more dynamic, the 1st one looks like 2 standing pillars crushing something XD, and the 2nd one looks very generic
Any criticism is received and appreciated.
Image credits
https://www.instagram.com/itokazuuuu/?hl=es
Boichi Manga Author
2 years ago
1
2yr
Nude with gardener
By Paul Scott
This is a preparatory sketch for a proposed painting. Any critiques would be appreciated.
2 years ago
4
2yr
How is my pulp style poster art?
Hi everyone,
So I need feedback on my pulp poster. It's for my own novel set in the 1940s, and involves some of my characters. I would be glad to know any of your opinions.
Thanks in advance!
2 years ago
2
2yr
Criticism for the Portrait Composition
By Caleb Arias
Hello everyone, I am making this sketch of a 3/4 portrait, so I can have a good composition.
I want to somehow be able to add the flower elements at the top left, and the flowers at the bottom right.
Without sacrificing the composition, since being in the middle I feel that it is very static, what do you think?
2 years ago
1
2yr