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storyboarding
Hello guys! I drew this today, it took like an hour. The intention is to practice for storyboarding. I would love some critiques please. Suggestions of resources would be great as well ! cheers ! <3
1 month ago
storyboarding
2
1mo
Composition critique
Hey, I’ve been needing a website like this for some time. I live on an island and have no one to get feedback. I struggle with composition. I’ve just finished this painting but am curious to see what people think and how they would’ve laid it out differently. it’s of a small battle between a plantation owner and a french pirate that happened in the late 18th century. I struggled with the perspective too but I think it’s there. Anyway, please let me know.
2 months ago
Composition critique
12
2mo
Please, urge need fof HELP / CRITIQUE / FRIENDS!
Hi! My name is Pasi and I'm looking for C&C / general feedback of my work. These are just for personal use and I'm looking for to make a transition to illustrator/2d art freelancing jobs for the next year. Currently working in graphic design. - Feel free to C&C /to comment on anything - is there something, that pops out in my drawings? - do you see something (like a fundamental skill) that would really boost my art, if I learned more about? (If so, maybe you can recommend a online tutorial/education) - my style varies, do you see this as a problem? Should I be concentrating more in one style or way of drawing? I'm looking forward to dive in to this Proko community, because I know that one BIG thing what I'm really missing is network/art friends/community! I'm really alone in the north :D ps. I have been drawing more seriously about 10 years for my personal joy. I do like animation/Disney/Ghibli/books/scifi/fantasy/Tolkien/Witcher/ etc. and because I'm a father of to boys, I also like to draw children's stuff. Thanks, Pasi
2 months ago
Please, urge need fof HELP / CRITIQUE / FRIENDS!
Please, urge need fof HELP / CRITIQUE / FRIENDS!
Please, urge need fof HELP / CRITIQUE / FRIENDS!
Please, urge need fof HELP / CRITIQUE / FRIENDS!
Please, urge need fof HELP / CRITIQUE / FRIENDS!
Please, urge need fof HELP / CRITIQUE / FRIENDS!
Please, urge need fof HELP / CRITIQUE / FRIENDS!
Please, urge need fof HELP / CRITIQUE / FRIENDS!
Please, urge need fof HELP / CRITIQUE / FRIENDS!
Please, urge need fof HELP / CRITIQUE / FRIENDS!
7
2mo
Composition suggestions
I posted on here a couple of days ago and was so genuinely impressed by everyone's feedback I want to use it again. I'm trying to do a historical representational picture of some caves on the island where I live. These caves used to be used by the indigenous Lucayan Indians, so I want to paint a scene of them using them. I have some good reference pictures of how they would've looked but I'm not sure how to place them. I've put a stick figure in for scale. There can be as many or as few as necessary. There will be shafts of light coming down through the holes in the cave ceiling so I know I definitely want a small campfire with the smoke going through the light. The background still has a fair amount of work to go including a lot of vines and sunlight dappled on the ground and the shafts of light coming through the holes. I'll add my reference photo I'm using so you can get an idea of what it should look like but obviously it doesn't have people or shafts of light. Any suggestions on how to place the people and any criticism on colour/saturation/contrast is welcome too. Thanks everyone :)
3 months ago
Composition suggestions
Composition suggestions
4
3mo
Pen drawn potrait
Loosely based on a real person, but mostly from imagination.
4 months ago
Pen drawn potrait
6
4mo
Need suggestions on image construction and clarity - input welcome!
Hey everyone! I'm trying to develop a more interesting piece from this drawing and develop some composition and design skills. I am looking for some feedback on a few sketches. The idea is of a swordsman being compelled by a female demon who whispers conspiratorially into his ear. The style I am interested in is what you would see in linoleum or wood block prints - well established shapes and planes with clear edges. I've been watching this fella on YT - Emil Salmins, as he carves big ass drawings onto linoleum and cuts each line out with tiny chisels and gouges. The carving process puts a certain constraint on the rendering style of this kind of work, clear shapes and bold lines. 1 - original drawing I am trying to elaborate upon Last two are pieces by Emil Salmins - https://www.emilssalmins.com/about
4 months ago
Need suggestions on image construction and clarity - input welcome!
Need suggestions on image construction and clarity - input welcome!
Need suggestions on image construction and clarity - input welcome!
Need suggestions on image construction and clarity - input welcome!
Need suggestions on image construction and clarity - input welcome!
Need suggestions on image construction and clarity - input welcome!
7
4mo
Composition ideas with the waterfall?
Hi everyone! I'm Siqi, and I started a painting based on a photo I took of a waterfall. I roughly blocked in the colours today, but I'm not happy with the shape of the waterfall, and the photo doesn't conveniently offer an aesthetically pleasing shape, haha. I couldn't really figure out a better shape ... so any suggestions would be very much appreciated! This is a bit of a branch of a dam-waterfall, so it starts from a pool of water at the top, and is kind of wide before it drops to a body of water at the bottom. Of course, I don't need to follow the exact structure of the waterfall, but in case that helps! Thank you! :)
4 months ago
Composition ideas with the waterfall?
Composition ideas with the waterfall?
4
4mo
Mountain Castle Composition
Hello everyone, I was looking for some feedback on the composition of this castle. So the story goes like this, There was a very evil and wealthy king who had a huge castle in the mountains where the winter never ends. In a huge battle, he lost all his money and his castle was destroyed. Does the composition portray the description and does it look evil and epic at the same time? Thank you to anyone who takes the time to help me out.
5 months ago
Mountain Castle Composition
5
5mo
Looking for Critiques about my work!
I am a 3d everyday artist and I been creating art for 530+ days straight! While I feel my work has improved with time, I still believe I can get better, Ill select 10 of my "best work" hopefully you can all help me out if you are interested in checking the rest of my work: My Website is : stupidgiant.com My Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/stupidgiant/
5 months ago
Looking for Critiques about my work!
Looking for Critiques about my work!
Looking for Critiques about my work!
Looking for Critiques about my work!
Looking for Critiques about my work!
Looking for Critiques about my work!
Looking for Critiques about my work!
Looking for Critiques about my work!
Looking for Critiques about my work!
Looking for Critiques about my work!
4
5mo
Help me , can someone offer some critiques
My friend recently bought some art from me. So I thought I will surprise them with a new piece inspired by them. I’m going for this lost in the imagination of literature vibe. The aesthetic is disneyesque mixed with a bit of darkness and withdrawn for the main characters a little more.
5 months ago
Help me , can someone offer some critiques
4
5mo
Need feedback on Notan Master Studies
Hi everyone, I just did the notan master studies and I really struggle on this. Any suggestion?
6 months ago
Need feedback on Notan Master Studies
Need feedback on Notan Master Studies
6
6mo
How to do Marshall Vandruff's black and white value composition exercise
Hi everyone, I just watch the draftsmen on how to learn composition and I interested in doing one of its exercise which is only using black and white on master's painting. What is the procedure? Do I just trace the painting or redraw it?
6 months ago
4
6mo
Metaphor As Composition
Did anyone listen to the Draftsmen episode where Marshall introduces the book Picture This by Molly Bang? He talks about metaphor as composition... a gown is a waterfall, the stage design is like garbage, etc. I found it very inspiring. I'll attach an image that I made for a Proko challenge, where I was using metaphor prior to hearing it described that way. In the image I was going for a pleasant, mid century, Disney feeling. Everything harmonious, agreeable shapes and movements, easy, flowing. Feel free to add images in the comments where you tried to carry a consistent visual, emotional metaphor through a piece of work.
6 months ago
Metaphor As Composition
8
6mo
A little feedback?
Would like to know your thoughts about this recent composition.
6 months ago
A little feedback?
7
6mo
Faces tell stories
Hi All, i was wondering dose anyone have any good reads on faces that tell stories. For example Wrinkle lines around eyes are an example of someone who I have a squint a lot. or x type of head shapes gives the impression of x. These are just example of the kind of thing I am looking for. thanks
6 months ago
1
6mo
Covid Friendly
Enjoy
6 months ago
Covid Friendly
2
6mo
Animation Scene Composition Feedback
Hey everyone! I'm working on a scene for a short animation and I was hoping to get some feedback regarding its composition. The sketch of the scene is supposed to represent a table full of food, a grandma looking down at the grandson, and the grandson blindfolded sitting down at the table. The whole scene is going to be a quick joke about how usually grandmas expect their grandchildren to eat a huge amount of food when they visit. :D My only concern is the fact that the wall is not parallel to the edge of the table, which I found to be very uncommon in dining room references. This might make the scene look odd to the viewer. However, it could be that I'm totally overthinking this... Also, the items on the wall are not completely random since they contain a small easter egg for a future episode, so they do have some importance. This is one of the reasons why I wanted the items on the wall to be easy to understand and not distorted. I would highly appreciate your thoughts on this. Is the setting easy enough to understand and pleasant to look at? Or does the orientation of the wall throw everything completely off? Thank you!
7 months ago
Animation Scene Composition Feedback
2
7mo
B/W only comps suggestion
Hello everyone! I made some pretty quick b/w only comps, i always find it difficult to work only with 2 values and hard brushes. Please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestion for improving my comps!
7 months ago
B/W only comps suggestion
16
7mo
Is this a Pleasing Composition?
Hey Guys! I just completed SVS learn's Creative Composition 2.0. The final assignment was to compose a scene based on this description " Quickly the little salamander scampered down to the forest floor and hid from the squirrel!" I also had to include as many elements as possible so it may feel a little chaotic but I wanted to create a pleasing composition. What do you guys think about it and what could I have done better. Please help me with it. Thank you!
7 months ago
Is this a Pleasing Composition?
15
7mo
Illustration Sketches Feedback
Hi! These are some sketches I made for my illustration class. I'm trying to become a book cover illustrator :). Critiques are welcome. Also any advice on how to create interesting compositions? I'm having a hard time figuring that out. Thanks!
7 months ago
Illustration Sketches Feedback
Illustration Sketches Feedback
Illustration Sketches Feedback
2
7mo