Is this composition working..?!
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Arbër R.
Working on an illustration for an ongoing set of illustrations related to a story I call AXR2120.
In AXR2120 humanity has reached a world that exhibits a phenomena where their underlying inner monsters can exist alongside them and are manifested as a variety of giant creatures in the physical plane.
For this illustration I am concerned about scale in the composition: I am wondering if the scale ratio of man to inner monster is portraying the phenomena well... what are your thoughts?
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Very interesting idea, keep exploring and developing it through these compositions!
I wanted to point on in this one that the perspective of the dragon’s head and the guy don’t match. If you put the in boxes they’re facing different directions. It could be an interesting narrative to explore with multiple solutions. You could flip the guy to match the perspective of the dragon or vice versa, or you could give the dragon some bend in the neck to connect the two different perspectives.
There’s a lot you can do with this, play with some different iterations!
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14d
Very interesting idea, keep exploring and developing it through these compositions!
I wanted to point on in this one that the perspective of the dragon’s head and the guy don’t match. If you put the in boxes they’re facing different directions. It could be an interesting narrative to explore with multiple solutions. You could flip the guy to match the perspective of the dragon or vice versa, or you could give the dragon some bend in the neck to connect the two different perspectives.
There’s a lot you can do with this, play with some different iterations!
Thank you Melanie. I have no idea how I didn’t spot that perspective inconsitency but it’s super obvious now that you’ve pointed it out. As I was initially hesitant to post, I am glad I decided to get feedback.
