Very interesting idea, keep exploring and developing it through these compositions! I wanted to point on in this one that the perspective of the dragon’s head and the guy don’t match. If you put the in boxes they’re facing different directions. It could be an interesting narrative to explore with multiple solutions. You could flip the guy to match the perspective of the dragon or vice versa, or you could give the dragon some bend in the neck to connect the two different perspectives. There’s a lot you can do with this, play with some different iterations!

Welcome! Thanks for sharing your art, really awesome work! I really like the first pen and ink piece, and the last one has some incredible scale and movement, really cool composition! Looking forward to seeing your progress

Besides what Steve Lenze has mentioned, consider the lighting. You currently have 4 light sources: 2 equal sources of light from both left and right directions, 1 direct front facing light source, and one from top right of the image (left of character). While having many light sources is not incorrect, it is quite complex. If you decide to keep them, you have to make sure that the shadow shapes are designed as per the lighting conditions. An easy way to approach it is as follows: Set your first light source...outline the shadow parts of this light Set your second light source...outline the shadow parts of this light Repeat for other sources of light... Where these shadows intersect will be your darkest tones, and where they do not, become affected by the other light sources, hence making them brighter. Keep it up!

Welcome to the forum. I've only recently started posting here myself, although I've been on the site a few years. It might seem a little quiet around here sometimes, but for an internet forum these days, it's actually pretty active. I like that rock figure.