Looking for critique - cake illustration
3yr
Natali Santini
Hi!
I am planning a new cake illustration and here is the final notan I came up with, a rough sketch and a color sketch.
The concept is to show how sweet and delicious the cake is. The cake is the center of interest.
The plate, the cup and the flatware will be a bit more designed to give it a more elegant look. To make it look a bit more playful I thought about adding a red checkered tablecloth to the illustration.
The thing behind the cake is a napkin stand.
Is the composition working? Is it clear from a distance what is in the image? What should I change?
All feedback is very appreciated!
