Please critique. Feedback only breeds improvement. Thank you

Hey! Here is my 2nd attempt at this assignment (technicality 2nd and 3rd) I am having difficulty grasping the "messy" line part of this project. I draw through, look for rhythms and shapes, etc. but I have a strong habit of drawing "clean lines" if I see a mistake (line not where they are supposed to go or got a shape wrong, a proportion error I noticed) I will go in and correct it. Maybe I am misunderstanding and my sketches are what the assignment is looking for or perhaps I am not getting something. the first two rabbit pages are studying refs, the 3rd is exploring and the last rabbit is my final. the two jackal pages are self-explanatory. In this assignment, I tried my hardest to be messy/exploratory and not concerned with rightness so I included a "sketch" I did while having fun with level 1 to show what my usual sketches look like (I posted this exact thing in the class's comment section but I find it not very active very often SO I am here as well)

#240212 Practice / study drawings. RSB sketchbook. HB mechanical pencil. Various refs. among them Loomis, Woodward and Michael Hampton.

Mr. Proko said to post, and it'll make me better. So I'm posting. Pear 1 = my try before the guidance/walk-through. Pear 2 = doing at the same time as the walkthrough. Any feedback is welcome. :-)

first attempt any suggestion would be appreciated

Hello, Did the pear assignment before the demo. Had fun doing it. Now I am going to Watch the demo. Grtz from Holland!

Hello everyone. Looking for critique. Thanks

Hello everyone. Looking for critique. Thanks

I want to share some of my drawings. Feel free to critique or share your thoughts. I’ve been stagnant for a while now, so I’m hoping that this change will help me improve.

I have a strong attachment to the Border Terrier breed (I have my second one now) and I saw this one on the Border Terrier subreddit. He looked so regal and handsome so I decided to do a portrait to help me with my proportion practice. The fur was pretty difficult so I tried to capture the overall flow and direction since I don't have a lot of practice with texture. Please let me know what you think and I hope you all like it!

Hello everyone. Looking for critique. Thanks

Hello everyone. Looking for critique. Thanks

Hello everyone. Looking for critique. Thanks

Hello everyone. I am looking for critique. Thanks

Hello everyone. This was my attempt at using line weight to make my art more dynamic? I feel like I managed to communicate light to shadow and outer form vs inner form, but I don’t really feel any sense of depth from my lines except for the fact that they represent a 3D form. Please critique, thank you :)

Decided to try portraits in perspective. I’m not very good but I know I can get better with practice. Critique appreciated.

Landmark practice from the example videos from the figure drawing course. I'm wondering how accurate I was with placing landmarks like the scapula and where I need to improve. I'm also wondering how accurate I was to the poses in general, any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

This is a carricature I did it was made on a live model can y'all give ya feedback on it

Just looking for some feedback. Thanks!