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Your drawings feel more like a poofy cloud than a solid sculpture.
This often happens from leaning too heavily on soft edges. Solid mass is described by a variety of edges, not just one. Learning to control the transition from sharp cast shadows to soft, rounded forms will make your work feel more three-dimensional.
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Scott
11d
Another attempt. I'm seeing edges everywhere I look now. So that's good.
This one is using acrylic paint (black and white) on canvas paper with a scumble technique. I am happy with this one. I wanted to have multiple edge types (check) and show the form with the edges (check).
Juice
11d
I remade this blob-Luigi with the critique i got in the video. In mind.
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11d
Looks awesome! I love the cast shadow from the hat. @Juice
Scott
15d
Trying to apply the lessons from the critique. Some more.
Scott
16d
Trying to apply the lessons from the critique.

Richard W
17d
Hi everybody,
Watching this critique, I am wondering how you manage to show the different types of edges when using hatching for the values...
Any input is welcome

onigi *pronunce [on-ie-gee]*
17d
"You're not fiding firm edges and you're not fiding enough sharp edges"
Ah, in Digital Painting Fundamentals course one of instructors pointed out it but I completely forgot until I watched this video. Checking your old notes regularly is crucial...
Juice
18d
Thank you for the critique Stan! And for tumbnail😊 Yeah after seeing level 1 crituiqe i felt I missed Sharp edges in cast shadows on my assignments. I will improve on that. I notised after i sent in my assignment that cast shadow from nose on the first one was way to short. And i guess i made it shorter from the hat because of the eyes to make them look better. But to be more true to the light reference i should have made it longer. Thank you this was very helpfull!

HAK24
18d
Many Thanks Professor Stan!! For your efforts and Critique ❤️ .. I’m so excited to more challenging projects, To challenge myself, fail, succeed again and try again.
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