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After watching the demo, critique and doing a few more of level 2 exercises, I decided to do two attempts using these references.
been practicing for 2 weeks….I hope the results are showing from everyday practice….😅
Will continue to do these as I move through the course. Looking forward to the next topic now 😃
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Hey @pinkfin. Nice work 👍 15 does feel a bit off, but it seems to be angled in the right direction. It might be because the side plane doesn't go back far enough. It looks like the side plane is the front plane because of the proportions.
Last 6 box-heads/head-boxes! Still struggling with the silhouette of the headshape leading my decisions for putting down the converging lines, though I yet again am able to see an improvement.
Any kind of critique is very welcome, have a nice one everybody!
Alright, after watching the critique I feel pretty bad about these, I'll try and do some again! In the meantime maybe someone wants to chime in :D
After watching the demo, critique and doing a few more of level 2 exercises, I decided to do two attempts using these references.
been practicing for 2 weeks….I hope the results are showing from everyday practice….😅
Will continue to do these as I move through the course. Looking forward to the next topic now 😃
Did a few more practice after watching the demo, and critique. This is fun and it takes a bit of brain power to concentrate to get the proportions at least close to looking good.
more boxes from the video I think I need to keep in mind relationships and do a bit more measuring
I always wondered how a box could help me draw people in perspective. I mean, the head is not a box! But now I understand. Thank you so much! This was a difficult exercise for me at times because I had to get the proportions, placement, etc., right. The portraits I did after watching the critique, I had to fix four times, starting over from scratch. I need to measure more, and my portraits are improving step by step, but I’m still not satisfied with the result. I don’t see the 3D head that Stan shows in his demos and critiques.
I just got the idea that the Asaro head might be helpful. Does anyone have more tips for better portrait drawing? I don’t know why, but my proportions in portraits are completely off at first, and I always have to make a lot of adjustments. It’s like I’m losing my ability to see properly when it comes to this topic
Here are my sketches after watching the demo video. I happy to see an improvement in my perspective after this exercise.
There’s a glitch my work was posted 4 times . Sorry everyone , dont know how to fix it .
Really had a lot of fun this time post critique . Im happy that i can now understand how to see the boxes in organic forms . My first try was messy as I didn’t know what to look for . Im also happy that in real life im looking for shapes and simple forms . Thanks Stan loving the course .
Here's the last set of practices before moving on to 3pp. I definitely feel like my skills are drawing head boxes have improved, but there's still much room for improvement. But I'm definitely done with drawing heads for the moment.
Heyo :) Tried my hand at these exercises and found them quite challenging. Especially number 9. After watching the demos I then realized that I struggle with foreshortening and I think I tend to make the faces too wide. Also I realized now that I seem to forget to align the smaller shapes like the lips, jaw and ears with the direction of the corresponding plane. Any critiques would be welcome! Have a good day :)
From a top view, the rear of the human head is wider than the front of it so I believe a "keystone" box top was intended to show it - hence the diverging lines.
Some proportion issues among other things. Not feeling confident about my progress if I’m being honest.
I saw it in the critique a few times. Is the center line of the box the center line of the face? I saw a few references where you could clearly see that one side of the front plane appears to be bigger than the other side.
Lv 1 Again. I tried drawing the Y Axis first to make it easier. Although I'm just noticing that some of my axis is off, but I'm going to commit to it anyway.
While watching the Level 2 demo and Critique videos, I tried the Level 2 project. When I see these pictures, I notice that they look less three-dimensional than how they look on paper.
has proko done on camera reference 12 anywhere? i am scrubbed each video and i dont know if i missed it. I'm having a lot of trouble with it.
Maybe a little late, but at 42:50 he shortly points out an example of ref. 12 that he says is accurate.
