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Patrick Alexander Büchi
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2d
added comment inCritique - Portraits in Perspective
Last 6 box-heads/head-boxes! Still struggling with the silhouette of the headshape leading my decisions for putting down the converging lines, though I yet again am able to see an improvement.
Any kind of critique is very welcome, have a nice one everybody!
Second try on the portraits in perspective assignment. Feels still a little off but much better than last time, at least when it comes to imagining the planes.
Critique are as always very welcome! Have a nice one :)
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My oh my what a struggle this was, but even though the assignment was terribly difficult I had immense fun trying to figure out what way the axes converged.
Also, I cannot simply put to words how amazing this task is. Even though I struggled, it has shown me a whole new perspective (understanding) on how to look at heads, perhaps even other objects, thanks!
And as always, any sort of critique is very welcome. :)
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8d
I agree, this exercise is great. You can do so much with a box in perspective. Glad you had fun working on this!
These are excellent. The only one that I think could be adjusted slightly is #1. I see a bit more of the top plane showing in the reference image, which means the head is pointed downwards more. Overall you've done a great job with these.
Posting my after - demo 1-point perspective drawing of a kitchen, still struggling, but the improvements since last time are visible I´d say :)
Next time I think I´ll try doing a grid too, Stans demo (as always) proved to be a great lesson on why use methods like these...
Any criticisms appreciated!
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16d
Awesome work! It's tough to pick out anything to critique here because you really nailed it. The only thing that I saw, which is very minor, is that the cabinets on the right side are a bit shorter than the cabinets on the front facing wall. Which, they very well could be because it's your room, your rules haha. Increasing the height would avoid the tangent with the corner of the range hood, though.
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What a struggle! I gotta practice this one a lot, not only am I struggling with the straight-ness/messiness of the lines, but I also dont know how to create a room out of my mind at all!
Patrick Alexander Büchi
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26d
Hello again, yet another and this time also the last addition of 6 rhythms. I already started feeling the improvement! especially on one pose I was very happy with (as you can see on the nota haha) for how fast and easily I was able to see the rhythms, and how confident my linework was this time (in all but one)
And as always, any kind of critique is very much appreciated! I hope you guys had also as much fun as I did, off I go to the next session!
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26d
You keep improving with each drawing. I really love this one. The big sweeping gesture that runs through the knees and the shoulder is great, and all the little rhythms that swirl out from the center give this pose so much movement. Keep it up!
Patrick Alexander Büchi
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1mo
Last but not least, 6 rhythms after the critiques! I'd say that I lack confidence the most, the messy lines make the drawing seem dirty/chaotic, though in the last two poses I'm quite happy with the result!
Any kind of critique is very much welcome, I'd love to know your opinion. :^)
Patrick Alexander Büchi
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1mo
Hey there! Another fay another 6 rhythm poses, this time with the additional knowledge of the demo.
The drawings still seem very static and I also find myself quite often being inconfident in putting down the line, it was fun nevertheless and I'll be practicing more into the future. :^)
Criticisms are very much appreciated!
Patrick Alexander Büchi
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1mo
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First try on the rhythm poses, very fun, but theres lots of spots that could be improved. I definitely need to make this a routine!
Wow, first time seeing this demo was absolutely mind blowing, so much great advice and knowledge compacted into a 12 minute video, thanks!
