Rachel Dawn Owens
Richmond, Virginia USA
Proko Community Critiquer//
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@kkmama
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5d
added comment inCritique - Simplify Pear from Observation
Critique please
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2d
I think the issue here is the reference. It’s a very pretty photo, but the bright white background is causing a lot of reflected light that flattens the image.
Find a reference with a darker background and a single obvious light source.
Maybe even light your own still life using a desk lamp.
Your drawing is really nice and clean. If you want to get the most out of this assignment, try again with a new reference.
Thanks for sharing! Good luck 👍
@bert54
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5d
My first attempt along with other references that I thought would be simple for a level 1. I did cheat on the pinball for proportions. Overall, it's a mixed bag. I do feel good about these after the fact despite knowing that my proportions are off.
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Melted Pancakes. This made me hungry.
@notapirate
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4d
THB, I had a lot of fun doing these simple shape drawings, and hopefully I get to do more (ᵔᴥᵔ)
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So everything is here. I just did not took the time to save the reference picture. My lines are getting better. Those raw sketch looks more like a craftsman work than before I started the course. Thanks a lot !
I lose energy super quickly when trying to draw from imagination, but I did it ! Even putting the goat and sheep in an illustration in progress from a DnD session (on the right of my paper) If you give me a feedback, please make it specific it helps me more ;)
Edit : to see full size you can click the "..." when you open the attached file. I just discovered this
Nikki De Backer
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4d
I could have done a better job with the diggers. I did not have a lot of fun drawing them. I also tried a character turn around.
Quique BA
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4d
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Here is my first attempt at the level 1 drawings, I tried to keep it as simple as I could but i felt it’s missong something but I don’t know what. I would apréciate any feedback or tip. TY
Yotas
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4d
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I already submited half of the excercises and today i just finished the rest. Any critique is very much appreaciated.
I have a question, i decided to do the excercise with two tones, is it a good idea to just continue to the next phase or is it a good idea to consider the re-do this but with three tones?
Thanks in advance!