Rachel Dawn Owens
Richmond, Virginia USA
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Norm Lanting
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added comment inProject - Designing Value Groups
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Wow. Very good
Mohamed Hassan
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Helpp🧍🏽♂️
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Feel free to tag me if you have any questions.
I do my best to answer!
@ason
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I really like doves, but they're very limited in expressions so I made him look more expressive, made him give you guys a thumbs up! :)
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He’s rad!
Doves could be made even more expressive if you push the shapes more. Consider the body language of a relaxed vs an alert bird.
Keep it as simple as you can and keep having fun with it!
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It’s really cool how you use color to separate the different drawings. Your pages are so chaotic but still clear.
Very difficult to do and you’re great at it.
@hampop
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After going through a couple of follow up tutorials on improving line quality and critique videos, I decided to give this project another go and pick my own images this time around.
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This guy is perfect
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It gets easier with practice. Keep practicing subtle values.
Nice work. Thanks for sharing.
Christle Panickar
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Here's my attempt.
I got stuck at the hippo but eventually managed to do it :)
Had a lot of fun doing this one.
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So much variety in style!
Tommy Pinedo
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Here is my attempt for this assignment. Pretty hard at first because I wasn’t sure how I can make each thumbnail different. I watched the two demos for level 1 and gave it a try. I tried to make each thumbnail different and try different colors and still keep it with 3 values.
I ⭐️ the ones I liked lol. Feedback is always welcomed. 🙏🏻
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These look great!
This one is my favorite. The only thing I might do differently is break up that diagonal with some smaller shapes. It helps draw the focus up to the face instead of distracting from it.
Laurent Van Acker
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Hey, I took some pictures of my son’s toy cars that I thought would be great for other people to use as reference and wanted to share.
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Thanks for sharing! These are so cute!
Yotas
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Hello!
I want to do the 13 pictures of level one with two tones first and then with three tones. I am around the third part of the two tones and I think I might benefit from getting some critique.
Thank you so much!
By the way I am seeing very interesting excercise already!
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It looks like you got it! These are perfect for notan thumbnail studies. The shapes are very nicely designed.
Some of the shapes on the Sorolla one are a little bit clunky. The original painting is so fluid. Try bringing that into the thumbnails more.
Keep it up. Can’t wait to see the next ones 👍
