Rachel Dawn Owens
Rachel Dawn Owens
Freelance artist and animator
@karl2019
So, these were before the demo and critique. Honestly, I don't think I'm going to be redoing the boots again lol the shoelaces were really difficult. I saw the demo already and saw his approach to just drawing a sort "box" to incase the boots in. I think I am going be using that technique from here on out. Any feedback is welcome I'm not sure if my other posts have gotten feedback because I don't know if there is a notification that goes off if one is given feedback.
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Rachel Dawn Owens
These are lovely drawings. Don’t be afraid to make darker marks sometimes too.
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Dermot
These are my most recent Blobs to Boxes. I do feel a little unimaginative with the project and find myself folowing the same routine with each set of Blobs ! I'm not sure how to vary things more. Looking at the drawings I've posted, I've just noticed that I've lost diminution alot too, as I've got larger boxes further away! I've also noticed you can't see my blobs ! So I've highlighted them in the second image.
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Rachel Dawn Owens
These look great. You could try making some longer, narrow rectangle boxes. Or flat, wide boxes. Look around your environment and notice all the box like things. Books, wood beams, cabinets, ect. Use them for ideas.
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Marco Sordi
2024/4/23. Good morning everybody. Here's another tribute to my favorite Disney movie ever: "Clash of Spirits" (acrylics and acrylic gouache on Fabriano watercolors smooth paper, 30.5 x 45.5 cm, 300gr). Thanks for your comment or critique. Have a good day!
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Rachel Dawn Owens
Wow. I love these colors
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@egusisoup
Exaggeration - Day 2 First day of trying to exaggerate a pose on my own. Was incredibly difficult but looking forward to trying more this week
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Rachel Dawn Owens
Don’t be afraid to take it too far. Push it till it breaks and you will learn the limits with practice. It’s easier to pull back than it is to push a pose further. These are very nicely proportioned and balanced figures. Great work 😃
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@coralsea
It was ok drawing the penguin and some parts of the character with the whole arm and shoulder but the hand demanded much more precision, and I just did the first gestural lines with the whole arm and quickly switched. I can't really do tapered lines for the moment. Also, I don't know if the overhand grip is the best option or just normal grip but moving the whole arm? Any opinions? :)
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Rachel Dawn Owens
Excellent! You did this assignment exactly as you were supposed to. An overhand grip generally makes drawing with the whole arm easier. Drawing larger helps too. Overhand grip is how a painter holds their brush because they can make broader strokes. If you want to draw small, the tripod grip is more natural. I like to draw small and I think It’s good to practice both. Big, overhand grip drawings help loosen up the hand and the mind.
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Wibble Wobbles
Fun and helpful.
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Rachel Dawn Owens
These are really good.
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@j4e8a16n
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Rachel Dawn Owens
Wow, nice study!
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@jensdawg
Level 1 attempt. I am hoping that I was on track for what this assignment was asking for. I think I should’ve slowed down a bit and thought through a plan with the blob instead of trying to jam a three point box into a 2D space at times. Any further feedback is appreciated
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Rachel Dawn Owens
These are looking great! Most of them look right to me. I noticed a few that were a little off and I drew over them to show you. While some points are way off the page, it’s still good to imagine and estimate where it might be in space. Good work, keep it up!
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Ezra
i made the finger bones too thick😅
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Rachel Dawn Owens
That’s ok! Thicker fingers make them look less creepy. I like all your notes on the side. Those will get you far with your education. These drawings are so good 👍
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Robert Howland
I found the Penguin and hand gesture the most challenging due to a lack of straight lines. I couldn't resist erasing instead of just drawing more lines on top of each other and I need to focus more on the gestural lines instead of getting lost in the details. Overall, I liked this project.
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Rachel Dawn Owens
Nice job. Gesture drawing just takes practice. You can’t overthink it. These are solid drawings. Keep at it!
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Alejandro Martínez
I made several attempts with the base exercise reference and this other one... I got pretty close in the end, but I still managed to squeeze the top and bottom parts a bit. I'll keep practicing. Gosh, this is tough.
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Rachel Dawn Owens
It looks like you’re getting it! The measurements are nearly perfect. The face is terrific.
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Luke Ng
Here's my second attempt after watching the Demos. It's a skatepark I struggled alot with this one because I started frawing the furthest objects first and projected them away fram the vanishing point. This made it much harder to make all my lines converge to the vanishing point. I ended up using a ruler to make guides for my converging lines. All critiques are welcome!
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Rachel Dawn Owens
Super clean. I think you nailed it.
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Simone
Left: before the demo | Right: after the demo
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Rachel Dawn Owens
Very good!
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Chun Tang
the graphite range that worked for me was: 4B 2B HB F. 1st range was too close, 2nd too far; finally felt good about the 3rd pear.
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Rachel Dawn Owens
3 little bears haha. Good practice. I like that you tried 3 different value ranges. That’s really great practice. The 3rd pear is best although I like the soft shading on the first as well. It’s pretty. Keep it up 👍
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Dazzle WeatherTheEvee789
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Rachel Dawn Owens
Precious
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Arthur Nesbitt
Here's my pre-demo attempts at the assignment. Simplifying the hair and trying to capture the subtle value changes in there was really throwing me through a loop. I'm looking forward to this course!
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Rachel Dawn Owens
These look great. I like your smooth shading. Here’s one concept that may take your drawing to the next level. Think of the 3d planes to decide the design of the values. (I did not include bounce light here. That can be added too) Each value is a different plane. Overall, this looks great. Keep at it!
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Phil
Here’s mine, will have to do more of these.
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Rachel Dawn Owens
Wow! Looks excellent. You made the right sort of mistakes. This feels dimensional and his face doesn’t look too wide to me. Even if the overlay says otherwise. Your drawing looks right so it’s right.
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@praxi
Asked for help
Had more trouble than I expected doing this exercise digitally. I find that my ellipses are more accurate if I go fast, but my line weight is better if I go slow. Will definitely keep practicing this!
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Rachel Dawn Owens
I’m not sure if this is true for everyone, but I find that the mushroom exercise is more difficult to do digitally. The dexterity you can achieve with a digital stylus is limited in comparison. It looks like you did a nice job anyways. Good work stretching and squashing the mushrooms. 👍
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carla toms
Additional hippos, level 2
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Rachel Dawn Owens
Nice!
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Tom Simpson
Here's my first attempt at the 'Trace models' assignment. I may revisit these after watching the videos again. Critiques welcome!
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Rachel Dawn Owens
Nice job!
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