Critique - Build a 1-Point Room - Level 1
Critique - Build a 1-Point Room - Level 1
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Critique - Build a 1-Point Room - Level 1
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Eiko Fazio
Took me forever to draw a city with 1 point perspective
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COMMENTS
Stan Prokopenko
Alright, we're diving into another level 1 critique. I'll check out your 1-point room submissions and talk about perspective accuracy, line quality, and other common mistakes.
@chary
3d
I think I’m probably about six months behind others at the same stage, so I took some time to review some of the earlier lessons.
@thenotsogrim
Been dreading continueing this to be honest, but I finally mustered the mental energy to finish a piece after the critique. Full disclosure, I absolutely rushed it just to get through so I "can" go to the next lesson. In any case I tried to pay attention to my mistakes, so I think it was still useful, but it definitely drained me to continue :P
Daniel Cabot
More practice of 1 point perspective, that x angle trick is very useful for finding center point of things in perspective
Eiko Fazio
4mo
Took me forever to draw a city with 1 point perspective
Eiko Fazio
4mo
I tried a very low vanishing point. For whatever the reason, this angle was so hard for me. My first attempt failed miserably and I decided to redo. The 2nd time came out better, but my hand got tired and all lines became wabbly and messy :(
@acorn9
4mo
I love the mushroom pictures above the bed.
Tommy Pinedo
I did another 1 point perspective assignment after watching the critique video. I decided to move the horizon line lower. I got an idea to create a scene to enjoy this assignment, using the mushrooms from the warm up exercise. 1. first image on the left shows my thumbnails of ideas, even some sketches of the mushrooms I’m going to use. Doing this really helps me get a good idea of what I want and don’t want. 2. middle image is halfway through and showing how I went about this assignment. 3. using the mushroom characters I made, I made CAPMAN who is the hero in this scene to capture the mushroom thief’s! lol I went with cap man because mushrooms have a cap also called a “pileus” and it sounds like Batman lol. I had fun doing this even though it looks childish lmao!
@goobish
1yr
In practice I found I need to be more aware of keeping verticals at a right angle to the horizon line especially when rotating the page ,but I feel that will come with practice.
Chauncey Holder
the critique help, im gonna try different angle it seems I awlays gravitate to this werid in distant perspective.
Nikita
1yr
More attempts with free hand, feels very rough and unpleasant , it's quite hard to publish such works since the only possible critique for this is "just do more"
Nikita
1yr
@iulis
1yr
Lazy Nezumi Pro is for Windows only. Is there an equivalent for Mac? Thanks!
Jack H
2yr
Did a hospital room this time. Tried drawing a thumbnail before approaching the main picture and it does help a bit. The L-shape sofa was a little difficult as I tried to draw the whole thing at one go. I think I could have broken it into smaller boxes and combined them together.
Alexis VanLandingham
These are two attempts at one point. I didnt realize how difficult flooring patterns would be.! They were a bit more than my skill set could handle but i tried. **original images are from The Shinning and Five Nights at Freddys.**
William Mclean
my visual libary for rooms is real bad. never paid attention to them. im gonna look up refrence and try do room studies
May Berry
2yr
My line quality and accuracy has gotten better. Although I'm struggling to draw doors and windows on the side walls. Still not having fun with this project. It's mostly because my visual library for indoor rooms is pretty low, so I end up drawing the same thing over and over. I will do some 1 point perspective draw alongs and references.
Robert
2yr
The bench looks off. Try to make your horizontals the same
@jasonj33
2yr
Alexis VanLandingham
Wow good job
The guy from BluishDot
Great video! I always enjoy watching these. It’s always really useful to compare the critiques to my own work and see what applies. Here are also a couple more attempts after checking some of the lines with a colored pencil. (I’m not sure what I was going for with the table in the second one… I wanted to try something “modern” that’s mounted to the wall, but it ended up looking like the back panel from a basketball hoop :D)
@bonnieblue
Hi y'all, HELP PLEASE 1 point perspective. Here's what I was going for, I like everything except the seats on the right side. I hate them. Any ideas how to fix them so they'll look like seats? Thank yall for your responses, I really appreciate your input
Alexis VanLandingham
This is awesome!!
Brandon
2yr
Thank you for the critique and I should use my ruler to check my lines. Coz I drew these in free hand, my arms just could not draw from certain angles, rotating the page should also be done ... This is the 8 or 9 month since I joined the course, and I just keep doing the line exercise you recommended I guess the the works pay off. And I watched some random youtube video talking about perspective. drawing in general is fun for me but before the course I can only copy instead of trying to understand the reference and the only thing I could draw are just boxes (which I have no idea is right or wrong) from different perspective. I just think it would be weird if the clock is in 1 point instead of 3/2
Lenserd martell
My work came out!! thank you!
Juice
2yr
I like your sound effect 23:58 😄
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