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Chauncey Holder
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23d
added comment inCritique - Value Scales
This critique really helped me out i tired to stay away from the common mistake but i think i still ended up making it lol. but it was really helpful letting me see vaules abit better
Chauncey Holder
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27d
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this was fun but also challenging to do with trying to keep different varying of pressures.
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Nice consistency! I think it looks pretty good, just watch out for the transition between the middle greys and the darkest section, especially between the 2B & 4B for the top scale and #6 & #7 for the bottom scale, as it seems like a larger jump than the rest. I think you can try using a blend of the two pencils for this transition area, or just add on more layers of the 2B and use some slight erasing to lighten the 4B. I would also recommend aiming to take a picture with more even lighting, so either fully in the direct light or entirely within a consistent shadow area (the camera usually can adjust accordingly, but you may want to play around with the exposure settings). That way your awesome work can be seen the best :)
Chauncey Holder
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27d
from the criqtue it really helped me. i went back and redid alot of them and i think i see some improvements from the pervious drawings
I struggled with the curve but had fun. It made me realize a lot I had hard time with the boxes cus my lines tend to curve when trying to make them straight, and creating a circle within a box. But I did have a lot of fun learning something new!
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Multiple attempts of the whistle from memory from the same angle. Trying to subtracting form, and adding form is interesting it was very difficult for me. But I think I'll keep at it cause it helps me with the shapes
Substraction looks solid, but there are problems with the perspective. The lines need to converge away from the viewer, meaning they need to get closer the farther away from the viewer they get. Check out how in your drawing the distance A is larger than the distance B. A should be smaller than B, because it is farther away.
I added an example with stronger perspective. Notice how distance C is smaller than distance D.
Chauncey Holder
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2mo
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This was pretty challenging the shapes was a bit of a struggle and I gotta practice it more. But this was fun to do
Chauncey Holder
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2mo
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This was really challenging coming up with poses! I really struggled with the twisting form cus I think I get so lost in tryna connect the part to another
Oh yeah, twisting can be quite challenging! One thing I found that helped me with twisting a box is to try and visualize each of the corners of the lower square connecting to a new corner in the upper square. That way, you don't end up lost.
