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pinkfin
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13d
added comment inDemo - Gestural Architecture
fairy house!
feels like the drawing is flat i don't know what i messed up... Would really like to receive critique!
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13d
We're looking at the houses pretty straight on in this view, and there are no plane changes, since they're round, so it's more difficult for the viewer to find a point of reference for the perspective. Maybe changing the point of view, moving it either up or down so that we see the top plane or the bottom plane of the houses, or adding something more cube like in shape will help with the flatness! I really like your idea here, keep iterating on this!
pinkfin
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2mo
I forgot to save line art after fixing the head:(. But second photo head is fixed! Had a lot of fun drawing:)
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2mo
Hey @pinkfin. Nice work 👍 15 does feel a bit off, but it seems to be angled in the right direction. It might be because the side plane doesn't go back far enough. It looks like the side plane is the front plane because of the proportions.