Really nice and clean work!

Very good! Clean and anatomically very believable.

This looks great.

I like your shading. It's very smooth and I can't tell if it's done on computer or with markers. I think you have done a good job with all the eyes.

Nice! I think you did a good job with the structure and edges. I feel like the forms are quite clearly defined. - When drawing an eye, i think it's a good idea to lightly indicate the entire eyeball in the early stages of the drawing, to make sure that you make it a sphere. In your drawing I get the feeling that the eyeball is slightly oval in form. - You might have made the part of the sclera that's in shadow too light. A helpful trick to get values right, is to squint at the refernce. If you do that, you might notice how the sclera in shadow, merges into a single shapes with the other darks. They are part of the same group. - You could also make the shadows darker, for a clearer read of what's in light and what's shadow. Hope this helps :)

Wow! This helps a lot! Thanks mate :)

Hi esheilds. Your bottom eye looks accurate and pretty. I like that you added the shading under her brow. If I were to point anything out, I would go back to the lesson and pay attention when Stan talks about almond eyes. Your eye is very symmetric on the horizontal axis, I believe the shape would be more interesting if the bottom apex was more to the left. Especially since your reference has a really cute droopyness to her eye. This might be causing the eye to feel long? Either way the added structure will help you with preportion. Preportions that you might have gotten a bit blind to- you misjudged the proportion and shape of her eyebrow which makes the eye larger. Her top lid is showing more, which makes her expression calmer in the ref. The waterline- I dont know if this is a preportion issue or a drawing issue. It seems very thin. Its also completely white which makes it pop out too much. I like that you are adding it, but on a person, especially at this angle, It's a lot more subtle. A heavy black outline to show it is a bit severe. Or maybe its that the consistent shape you drew flattens it out, which kills the forshortening. Honestly, I don't know. It just feels like the skin of her lids is like a membrane, so if anyone else has any ideas. You are heading in a good direction I hope that maybe my feedback can help you out. (also a nitpick - this lady has a slight epicanthal fold that crosses over her inner eye - your drawing ends the fold prematurely. It makes sense that you missed this since many people don't practice anatomy on this eye style.)

Big improvement. I think I may have to buy his portrait drawing class too. I've been just practicing lay ins only and want to get that nailed down before I move on.

The front view of the right eye is on the money. They're all really good, it's just that that one looks best. I'm thinking the 3/4 view may need a bit more playtime with the values and it would make it pop up more.

Hi @jdobson004, nice work! I looked through both of your posts and I really like that you give the eyelids thickness and that you're clearly wrapping them around the spherical eyeball, giving the drawing a strong feeling of structure. - Try to use photos that have a clear separation of light and shadow. That will make it easier to follow Stan's step by step process, where step 2 is separating light and shadow. Hope this helps :)