Ash Chung
Ash Chung
Earth
Child Granny
Proko's rendering of example 3 looks wrong to me - the pelvis he drew looks like it's squeezed into 2/3 of her actual pelvis, and showing way too little of the top plane. Does anyone else see this? Also, the angle he drew for the bottom of the ribcage looks off given the angle of the shoulders - are her arms raised so much that the actual angle of the top of the rib cage is totally different than what you can see? Definitely confused and could use feedback (I know mine is wrong, too lol)
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Ash Chung
Challenging exercise.. and wondering the same thing when I was doing this one. For me, seeing her left knee, I sorta made out where the pelvis could angle. And as for the ribcage, I think the neck opening is more towards us and more foreshortened than the answer provided. My sketch is may be also off. Correct me if I'm wrong, anybody.
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Oyindamola Adeniyi
Could I get critiqued for these beans please
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Ash Chung
So tense, looks like you’re trying too hard. Also, it’s hard to read whats goin on with the beans esp the ones at the bottom right.  Maybe try doing warm up of drawing circles and ovals til it flows naturally, to the size, shape and stroke pressure consistency you want. And remember to relax your grip more.  Then, instead of diving straight into drawing the bean from imagination, try to copy from stills of the video or an actual stuffed sock to better grasp whats happening at certain positions and angles.  Hope this helps. Happy drawing. 
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Ash Chung
Part 1 of the assignment. Critiques most welcome.
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Ash Chung
Critique most welcome...
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Ash Chung
Went back and redo, to emphasize the oblique more
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Ash Chung
Hello, any feedback'd be much appreciated.
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Ash Chung
Hello, any comments would be much appreciated.
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Ash Chung
Am I posting in the the right section? Hi @Liandro Roger , here's my latest redo of the rib, last comment of #3 was that if the figure is arching its back, the lumbar part is less of an inward curve. For #7, the thoracic portion was bit too "S-curvy", should follow the same curvature as the back plane of ribcage. Hope I got it right?
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