Critique - Organizing Line Weight
Critique - Organizing Line Weight
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HM L
It's my level 2 practice.
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COMMENTS
Stan Prokopenko
Let's dive into your "Organizing Line Weight" submissions! In this critique I'll look through both level 1 and level 2 projects and discuss how to improve line weight issues.
Brandon Andrews
Here is my line weight exercise before watching the demo/critique. Definitely some things I would do differently now. But, that is why I'm taking the class. Any feedback is always appreciated.
Ash
6d
Very nice!
Alexander Agredo
Sharing my line weight exercise
Clément Douziech
Another try of line weight after viewing this video
Clément Douziech
light and shadows try
Xavier Rodes
Here are some drawings where I tried intentionally to change the line weight. The first is the Rhino one, that was intented for this project. And the other two were different parts of the house where I live. There were some perspective elements which weren't easy at all to handle with. Feel free to tell me your thoughts about it!
@meddd12
3mo
(From Line of action, i lost the ref)
Shohei Yoshida
So it doesn’t necessarily have to be faithful to the photo, right? For example, if I want the viewer to focus on the bear, but in the photo the rock has the strongest contrast, then faithfully reproducing that would draw attention to the rock instead. So in that case, it’s okay to adjust it, right?
Melanie Scearce
Absolutely right! You as the artist are in control, whatever you say, goes :)
Shohei Yoshida
I tried it too because the photo you posted @chary was so cute. This is pretty difficult. Shading itself is simple in the sense of getting darker or lighter, but I think it takes practice to balance importance and depth at the same time. I wanted to emphasize the lion’s mane as an important feature, but since the mane is on the light-facing side, the lines ended up looking light. Maybe I should have made the shadowed areas of the mane darker?
Eiko Fazio
6mo
Landscape in Tokyo - using lines with depth and shade
Eiko Fazio
6mo
Plant with simple line vs plant with Hierarchy by importance (right one)
@aportus
7mo
I liked the traffic light piece. It reminded me of some of the stuff you see on the liminality subreddit.
Marco Sordi
2025/10/12. Good afternoon everybody. This is my assignment for section. Thanks and have a good Sunday.
@smogo
8mo
love the line weight exercise!
HM L
9mo
It's my level 2 practice.
@roger3forz
OMG SO GOOD
@chary
11mo
I tried to incorporate the values of all three parts, and that's probably the main reason why my drawing isn't very good either way.
@chary
11mo
@rithu
1yr
Hi Everyone, I am practicing line weight digitally. I am able to pull my initial drawing with good lines but as I apply line weight as second line my lines aren't correlating with initial copy or I don't get tampering lines and It doesn't look good as initial drawing. Do I need to learn putting line weight in initial phase with planning or I am lacking practice to pull good line weight stroke in my second attempt? Help please?
Andrew Kovachik
Made a quick little drawing while watching. It was just a little bunny (attached) and I wanted to try and indicate the speed through the line weight. My thought was that I would indicate the parts of the motion which were in tight/stretched/pressure with a think line and the parts that I see as being relaxed were lighter. Not sure i'm 100% happy with it but atleast 70%. If anyone wants to try and make their own running rabbit I'd love to see how you tackle the speed aspect :) Edited a quick overlay of reference and drawing. My only excuse is that I I intentionally gave the front weight bearing paw an big curve to try and cue that its weight bearing. The rest is my generally messing up proportions. I think the ears I should have been able to get right as I realize my angle on the ears are just generally too much.
@brimarie
1yr
For me, the light-shadow method is the most difficult to grasp. I still find myself painting the shadow instead of just focusing on the line work;-)
@toph
1yr
after watching the video and practiced a littler, I found some appreciation for line weight. Any critiques are welcomed!
@tgambrell
1yr
First time drawing digitally so this was a bit of a challenge for me. Image of a trip I had in Hawaii, thought it would be cool if the image had an actual dinosaur. Any criticism would be appreciated.
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