Critique - Simplify to CSI
Critique - Simplify to CSI
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Critique - Simplify to CSI
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Mike See
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COMMENTS
Stan Prokopenko
Let's take a look at your "Simplify to CSI" submissions! I decided to combine both level 1 & 2 students for this critique since I saw very similar mistakes at both levels.
@lucyadair
19d
This is my attempt at simplifying the skull and camel. I also tried to simplify a photo of a pig but I'm not sure how well it turned out. Do my lines look okay or are they too messy? I tried doing a basic shape outline and then contourin and then placing my CSI line. I hope it doesn't look too messy.
@lucyadair
20d
Here's my attempt at simplifying a pair of high heels. I needed an easier pair of shoes to draw lol. Are my lines too scratchy? I tried to be more consistent with my lines and ghost the contour first.
Michael California
After viewing this set of critiques, I decided to draw something new. I took a photo of this dice bag on my table with a d20 and a dice box because it seemed like a good thing to practice the three curves on. It's feeling a lot more natural to break things down the more I practice.
Ben Kraske
20d
Spectacular job simplifying the folds on the bag!
Sebastian Rivera
My work before watching the demo, after the demo, then after reviewing the critique video my proportions could be better and my line weight needs work to but Im very happy with how the shell turned out on my third attempt.
Clue
1mo
Try to work on more clean lines as stan mentioned! Second one is after i see this video
Ben Kraske
1mo
Great improvement, your lines are looking clean and the shape of your boots has improved a lot! :)
Bill G
2mo
First time I'm submitting an attempt... not sure that I was aiming for the intended goal, but here is what I've got!
Charlotte
2mo
Here are my attempts at all four references before watching demos/critiques, any feedback would be greatly appreciated! Kinda regretted making the laces of the boots darker as soon as I did it, but they were too far gone at that point and I’d already spent so much time on them haha. The skeleton was my favourite one to do out of the four :)
Ben Kraske
2mo
Excellent work all around! You've done a great job simplifying the lines, and they're so clean!
Anshika Roy
Here's my first attempt on the snail and boots.
Oya
2mo
First attempt? This is so good
John Oz
2mo
Need to work on consistent line pressure throughout and actually picturing the line I want to create instead of drawing a few and erasing the ones I don't want.
@vonun
2mo
Hello everyone. I would love some critique on these. These are my exercises from the whole week. I watched the critique videos throught said week. When I arived at the last one it dawned on me. I drew all of the way too quick and didn't give my self enought time to think about the lines I wanted to make. I am also new to drawing digitaly. I learned a lot more about it but I had some starting difficulties where my pen made some weird marks. So the beginning ones may have some weird lines that are still visible. All of these are in chonological order and I posted the referece picture after my attempt. I would love to hear what I should be focusing on most during my practice and aspects I might have missed. Thanks in advance and have a great day^^
Nickdulis
2mo
Too damn hot to work. Mild climate and melting with 40 degrees celsius. Was completely fed up trying to work. Still suck at proportions and made new brush that helped me improve my lines + is more like a pencil so I can practice line quality better.
Bashayerfhs Bash
Ok .
@esmarieb
3mo
After watching the demo and the critique I redid my snail. Here is my second attempt vs my first attempt (the one with too much detail).
Charlotte
2mo
hi, i just wanted to say you can really see the improvement! :)
@kurodore
3mo
After critique notes I did this exercise on a water bottle.
Anthony
4mo
Final attempt after the video
@emilym
4mo
Did my level 1 drawing before watching the demo and critiques and absolutely realizing I didn’t do the assignment lol it was SO challenging to simplify and not try to draw the snail/boots “good”. I also found myself very lost in the details of the boots! Going to try some butterflies and moths with more obvious CSI lines and then try the boots again!
Bradley Gibson
I was kind of wondering what I do during this critiques other than just watching and listening to them. But I have found having these on in the background while also practicing using stock images and simplifying them has really helped
Lewis Lexter Yap
thanks for sharing this practice
Wong Colleen
The second version...
@xolotl1973
Don't think I simplified enough in the assignment, so tried a few more.
@ralk
5mo
Not so much an improvement in technique as changing my mindset. Stan recommended going back to give the boots another go if the laces were hard, and I think it is indeed a valid exercise in diligent shape-matching, thoroughly working from one side of the laces to the other, and trying to resolve each potential curve. I don't think I can fully let go of chicken-scratching my lines from years of careless doodling, especially with the laces' rapid curvature changes and small size, but I stuck to simple, sweeping lines when I see the opportunity to process and simplify. Doing the laces felt frustrating at first, but finding the fun in it kept me going.
Abby
5mo
Oh man. I haven't had it in me to try a second attempt at the boots (yet?). I really love how thin and flat you've drawn the bottom of the boots. Especially your 1st version, they feel really grounded and have a ton of character. I agree laces are much cleaner/better done in the second for sure. But I have to say, I think using more curved/fewer straight lines for the boot bodies in the 2nd version really loses that character and grounding of the 1st. Just an observation! I'm sure you were mostly focusing on the laces in the 2nd but it's interesting to see what Stan mentioned playing out here - that the combination of straight and curved lines in your 1st drawing works really well. Anyway, great job!
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