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After a loooong break I finally built up the courage to come back to the course. It is still the most entertaining way of learning how to draw ;) thanks Stan and the whole team!
In the first image i tried to cover as many of the reference pictures as i could on one page, and the other image shows my own creations. I try to catch up with the course and the other lessons. And thanks for any helpfull advice.
cheers !
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Let’s take a look at your “Dynamic Shapes” project submissions.
Because the project for level 1 and level 2 were essentially the same, just a different path to get there, I’ll be combining both levels into one critique.
I’ll go over some of the more common mistakes and give some demos covering ways to get your shapes looking more dynamic, interesting, and gestural.
I decided to put some more effort into the seal drawings by memory, so I redid them. Here they are 🦭
The first image is for level 1, and the second image is for level. As you can see, I got a bit creative with it and invented a new creature.
I felt the need to do more exercises for dynamic poses... With every attempt you learn something new.
I'm a little confused on how movement and such works in tandem with gesture, if that's how to phrase it, I kinda get the peaks and how they cause a stretch and pinch, but for some reason I'm not quite sure how to centralize that with relation to the action lines, lol.
I wasn't aiming for accuracy, but I did still struggle with the whole gesture concept :D
I did all of these today, trying not to take more than 5-10 minutes each.
I'd love some feedback.
- Thanks
Post demo: I tried to make more dynamic shapes and really accentuate the folds where there were pinches. I also played with the line weight a bit. The bottom one in the second picture really gave me some trouble (third photo is ref.)
Finally got some time in on dynamic shapes and gesture/rhythm from the next project and my practice feels so much more productive now!
My drawing on paper is " before watching the demo". In the beginning, I really enjoyed the process; the sea lions and seals were so cute and fun to draw. Unfortunately, I took a long break after watching the critique (about one month) . When I came back to this project, it felt harder to continue. I don’t see any improvement.
I tired to apply some of the advice in the criquite and I think they came out a bit more smoother, and flowly. I still really need to work on my lines.
Attempt from imagination. Any critique or feedback is welcome! In particular, I feel like my usage of creasing isn't as strong as it could be. Lmk and thank you!
I Tried drawing the seals from imagination and they didnt come out that great so i decided to retry level one and then retry level 2 but from memory still not the greatest results but its an improvement
notes during the demo I feel I am making progress any critiques would be appreciated thanks.
Tried to make some more seals, this time with a greater focus on the stretching and wrinkling.
My last set of 10 before moving on to the next lesson. 5 were from reference, 5 were from imagination. I think my shapes definitely have improved compared the the first few seals I drew. It is tough to figure out the right shape to use, but once you get it, its quite fun.
Post critique/demo attempts, I tried to be sketchier and focus less on drawing "seals." I can definitely feel how important this is and I wanna get it down, any feedback is welcome and appreciated.
The first two images are my observational sketches, while the last three are my sketches from imagination. I had a lot of fun with this assignment; I feel as though it really helped me understand proper shape design. Critiques would be appreciated.
These were fun I feel like my line quality needs to get better. Looking at some of the ones that other people posted I think helped out a lot with level 1 bout to move on to level 2 soon
