Hi everyone, I did this piece a few months back. To me, it looks ok, but I'm sure there are problems with it that I'm not seeing. Any feedback would be really appreciated. Cheers

Can you explain the weakness of this work? and what advice should i do?

Can you explain the weakness of this work? and what advice should i do?

So I've been drawing for years and here are some more recent works. I also tried out the free courses from the Marvel's the Art of Storytelling just figured I'd share

I made this following comic to express myself as I felt bad when my bestfriend refused to come on my birthday as a celebs birthday is more important for her

Well I want to post a comic on Webtoon site. My question how do I set up my comic and make money on it?

Hi everyone. I have had a go at inking digitally over a John Romita JR page, from the Assignment download folder. I have tried to capture the energy from his pencils. Not sure I have, so any feedback would be helpful. Cheers :)

Hi everyone, first time poster here. So I started to draw comic style line arts to illustrate my own novel. The attached image is my first attempt at line art illustration based on the story. I have experience doing character designs, but never tried something like this before. Let me know if you have any feedback or opinions, or improvement suggestions for my next drawings. Note that while I usually have references, for this drawing I didn't use any reference. Thanks in advance!

Hi All!  I've been developing a storyline in my head for a couple of years now... It doesn't seem to end, or leave me alone for that matter, so I better start scratching it onto paper! I've had the dream of drawing comics for a while now. I've used many online sources and books trying to gather information about the process and such, as well as about "how to draw" in itself. So here goes. These are the first three pages, done by hand. As I'm learning by doing, the idea is to do from start to finish a couple of pages at a time. This way I get to iterate the whole process several times and take pauses to analyse my way of working and what needs to be learned still. This also probably makes the first and last pages look completely different, but as this is merely for my own learning (and pleasure), that's alright. Things I already know I need to improve:  - more dynamic angles -> more thumbnailing - less messy mid tones - the second panel of the third page annoys me: it's the only panel where something actually happens, so why did I draw it so small?? :) - the penmanship sucks. I've yet to decide, whether to rehearse writing by hand or add the texts digitally later on. All in all, I'm proud I've come this far. I'm not going to redraw these pages right now, but move on. Any comments, critique and observations on what to improve in general (or regarding some particular panel / detail / etc) are very welcome. The photos are of poor quality, sorry about that.

Hello everyone, i am new here and joined because currently planning to watch proko fundamentals videos for getting better at drawing. I started this year and made some works, drawing in ballpoint and some pixelarts: https://www.deviantart.com/lordbakdunk I am intersted in joining some discord groups for meetING new people who share the same interests and showing each others art.

I'm really enjoying this course! Took a while, but got the pencils done just in time. I feel like I'm back in school and leaving my homework till the last minute, lol. Any constructive feedback very welcomed. Looking forward to the inking process. Cheers

Hello everyone, This is a piece that I'm currently working on of Johnny from the fighting game, Guilty Gear Strive, performing one of his super moves (reference attached). I've more or less completed the basic layout and wanted to get some fresh pairs of eyes on it before I move on to the next stage. I'm open to any thoughts or suggestions you might have. I drew the split card in the foreground as a vector, so it can be moved around/flipped/rotated no problem. The smoke and spark effects are very loose placements, they will be the last things I finalize after everything else is inked and coloured. But please feel free to share any ideas for their paths/shapes/placements, especially for things like the sparks in the foreground. The idea is that everything will be rendered/lit more or less like the reference, with objects in the foreground possibly being out of focus. Thank you for checking this out, I look forward to sharing the completed piece in the future!

Fixed last page piece. Boba's head in one panel was a little bit off and one of the mercenary's arm was a bit smaller for me in the last panel. Now fixed.

These were posted to the assignments page before deadline Thoughts?

The assigned was to pencil an Spider-Man & Black Panther story covering and introduction, conflict and resolution story arch. If was great fun as it was just one image but lots that needed to link together. I took a bit of liberty had depicted Shuri as Black Panther

Here are my boards for the three scenes. I made one panel adjustment to my one of them.

Here is my assignment. Made an adjustment on the 4th board.