RItesh Dhande
RItesh Dhande
India
17yr old aspiring to be an artist...
@aheneha
This is beautiful :) as for corrections, I think it you should use some harder edges in your work. Marco Bucci has an amazing video on it.
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RItesh Dhande
ohh sure i will watch it.. Thank you!!
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Real Jr
I loved the art as a whole, I can visualize emotions in it, even though it is very good, as your request was for criticism, the only thing that caught my attention was the face, looking at the region of the nose, because according to the angle of the head I believe you could have projected it slightly more out of the edge of the face, if only a little, because as in the part of the body the fabric of the clothes brings a lot of movement, I get this feeling of a straighter face when I look exclusively at him, but this may have been on purpose. I hope I had the ability to help in some way, your drawing was amazing 🙂
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RItesh Dhande
You caught me!! the nose do look odd now... I will try fix it.. Thank you..
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@kemon
looks beautiful. What do you think is wrong? If I wanted to nit pick, which I don't really, I would say the lighting is a bit inconsistent but its a quick sketch if I were you I wouldn't worry about that at all.
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RItesh Dhande
aaah... thanks for the review!! I will take care of lighting in my next sketch..
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RItesh Dhande
2yr
An approx 1 hr practice.... What is going wrong in this? Can you please help me !!
Steve Lenze
Hey RItesh, The one thing that you need to do is to stop using black to darken a color, this makes the colors look dead. Instead, you need to color shift and use either cool or warm colors in your shadows. Also, the hair looks kind of flat because there are no highlights. I did a quick paint over to show you what I'm talking about, I hope it helps :)
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RItesh Dhande
aah yes!! thank you so much... I will keep that in mind..
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RItesh Dhande
Did this painting yesterday Took me around 1 and half an hr to complete it... Please let me know any flaus you find in it...
Steve Lenze
This is really nice! The only thing I noticed is the far nostril is missing and there needs to be a darker shadow behind the ear to help pop it forward more. Other than that, I really like it, especially your subtle rendering. Nice work :)
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RItesh Dhande
aah yes, you caught me!! thanks a lot!! really appretiate it
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RItesh Dhande
Such a good combination of colors, loved it, Its not perfect ofcourse, but is pretty good... For now you can try to paint or atleast draw outine of individaul parts like face, hand and back understanding the anatomy and in full detail with lines to guide proportions and perspectice... also finding some reference to draw it again, and you will know where you went wrong by yourself....
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RItesh Dhande
2yr
Did this portrait yesterday Took me around 1 and half an hr to complete it... Please let me know any flaus you find in it...
Atharva Lotake
Hello there! I have been having a lot of fun doing the hand assignments. I would really appreciate it if you guys provide me with some helpful critiques. The problem that bothered me the most was the placement of wrinkles in the right place in order to exaggerate the gesture. I would love to hear your tips on that as well. I also tried adding color after doing the shading. Thank you and have a wonderful day ahead!
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RItesh Dhande
wowwww amazing
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RItesh Dhande
2yr
Procreate painting of asian elephant used symmetry to draw this any suggessions of how can i make it better?
RItesh Dhande
To start with proportions, check his nose, it looks a bit long, check distance Btwn hair line to mid of brows to nose to chin, u shall get the error.. check the top lip too... Compare with ref, u shall get the error.... Eyes n nose looks a little bigger, exaggerated... Anyway this is not a big deal, that main issue i see is the nose being too long, else shading is really good, u captured the form excellently....
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RItesh Dhande
wowww.. such a cute illustration.. to be honest i dont find anything wrong, this drawing is just perfect... u can move on rendering without any worries.... ur really good with line drawing for sure...... its just a suggestion - if this is something u drew from reference as it is... u can explore drawing from memory just to level up ur skills... otherwise this is just awesome... and if u drew this without ref... then dude ur too good
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RItesh Dhande
2yr
this painting was made on procreate the painting is supposed to be used as 4K desktop wallpaper so the left side is kept blurred or not much taken care off i drew the face with all the details i could grasp on right to balance the desktop composition with icons on left
molambird
what do you think is going wrong? apparently you have something in mind which seems not to be okay....would be a good start to tell us.
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RItesh Dhande
Ummm.. ok, but I don’t get it
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Kristian Nee
Hey Rltesh, this is a really good start to a really strong impressionistic painting. I'd say your drawing is fine, but the silhouette of her form, and the even lighting really hold the painting back. I think if you were to zoom out a bit and try to do something to make her silhouette more feminine, as well as pushing more dramatic lighting it would do a lot for the image. Good luck!
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RItesh Dhande
thanks a lot, I ll try correct and silhouette and lighting
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RItesh Dhande
Where is this painting going wrong??
RItesh Dhande
i drew a girl on her dads shoulder a butterfly girl, to convey her beauty from a dads POV whats going wrong in this drawing??
RItesh Dhande
he looks creepy xD
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RItesh Dhande
wowww nice job
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