I loved the art as a whole, I can visualize emotions in it, even though it is very good, as your request was for criticism, the only thing that caught my attention was the face, looking at the region of the nose, because according to the angle of the head I believe you could have projected it slightly more out of the edge of the face, if only a little, because as in the part of the body the fabric of the clothes brings a lot of movement, I get this feeling of a straighter face when I look exclusively at him, but this may have been on purpose. I hope I had the ability to help in some way, your drawing was amazing 🙂
Hey RItesh, The one thing that you need to do is to stop using black to darken a color, this makes the colors look dead. Instead, you need to color shift and use either cool or warm colors in your shadows. Also, the hair looks kind of flat because there are no highlights. I did a quick paint over to show you what I'm talking about, I hope it helps :)
Such a good combination of colors, loved it, Its not perfect ofcourse, but is pretty good... For now you can try to paint or atleast draw outine of individaul parts like face, hand and back understanding the anatomy and in full detail with lines to guide proportions and perspectice... also finding some reference to draw it again, and you will know where you went wrong by yourself....
Hello there! I have been having a lot of fun doing the hand assignments. I would really appreciate it if you guys provide me with some helpful critiques. The problem that bothered me the most was the placement of wrinkles in the right place in order to exaggerate the gesture. I would love to hear your tips on that as well. I also tried adding color after doing the shading. Thank you and have a wonderful day ahead!
To start with proportions, check his nose, it looks a bit long, check distance Btwn hair line to mid of brows to nose to chin, u shall get the error.. check the top lip too... Compare with ref, u shall get the error.... Eyes n nose looks a little bigger, exaggerated... Anyway this is not a big deal, that main issue i see is the nose being too long, else shading is really good, u captured the form excellently....
wowww.. such a cute illustration.. to be honest i dont find anything wrong, this drawing is just perfect... u can move on rendering without any worries.... ur really good with line drawing for sure...... its just a suggestion - if this is something u drew from reference as it is... u can explore drawing from memory just to level up ur skills... otherwise this is just awesome... and if u drew this without ref... then dude ur too good
this painting was made on procreate the painting is supposed to be used as 4K desktop wallpaper so the left side is kept blurred or not much taken care off i drew the face with all the details i could grasp on right to balance the desktop composition with icons on left
Hey Rltesh, this is a really good start to a really strong impressionistic painting. I'd say your drawing is fine, but the silhouette of her form, and the even lighting really hold the painting back. I think if you were to zoom out a bit and try to do something to make her silhouette more feminine, as well as pushing more dramatic lighting it would do a lot for the image. Good luck!