Yes, looks like the eye on the right went lower. You did good on the left (our left) side of the face though! Try measuring your angles with the sighting method! It also help to compare parts to one another. Look at where something lines up in the photo vs. your drawing, and see how you should adjust the drawing accordingly. Like his shoulder for example. By comparing where that line meets his face in the photo, you may notice that it meets a lower portion of the beard than you drew, and is a steeper angle that aligns almost with where his hairline comes to a point at the top of the ear.

I did a little draw-over of your angles/locations. It looks like you mis-measured where the top of his head should be, and it kind of ended up with everything falling lower than it should be. In your drawing, it almost looks like he is leaning in forward a little bit and his tilted the opposite direction from the photo. I definitely suggest triple checking your measurements, particularly the angles. If you haven't tried sighting, that would be good to try because it involves taking a unit and relating it to something else on the subject; sighting, and especially with sighting angles, helps me a lot personally.

Hey there! Don't sell yourself too short, I do think you got the main idea down. The places where it deviates tend to be areas where it's a bit more difficult to have a direct comparison side by side, like the hat, or diagonal lines like for the eyes and the shoulders, where it's easy to shift the angle accidentally from your reference angle as you're comparing. However, for something like the hat and the eyes (which are a bit off on size) I would recommend trying to use other parts of the image to use as a size reference. For the hat, the length of it to the highest tip is about the same if you go down to the tip of the nose, and again from the nose to the edge of his collar. It does help to have 2 reference points to compare, I find to be the case. When measuring angles for reference, it also does help to go back and forth at least one more time after you put down the mark, just in case something has accidentally shifted. But it looks like you learned a lot in this process, this is a good submission! Getting down that last 10% of accuracy is something that takes practice to train the eye, so you're on the right track :)

Nice work! The proportions of the big shapes are looking great! The smaller interior shapes always take a bit more measuring and adjusting to dial in. Drawing eyes larger than they really are is VERY common in learning portraiture. Just try keep it in mind and double and triple check the measures of those shapes while you're working on the lay in. It looks like you're drawing at a fairly decent size, but a good rule of thumb is to draw portraits roughly the size of your hand on the page. Its a little easier to be more accurate with your measurements the larger you draw. Keep up the good work!

Nice, the lay-in and likeness looks good! Studying your adjustments like this is great practice. You'll start to intuitively look out for making those adjustments in your next lay-in attempts, keep up the good work!

You're so close! I did a little digital layover to check your proportions. It looks like you drew the face a little bit too wide, causing features to be over to far to the right. The eye on our left seems okay, but the other eye is off along with the nose, ear, and mouth/beard. The mouth and beard was most noticeable to me, so I drew pink lines showing the position and angle compared to the photo. So double check your horizontal measurements for the most part, but don't forget to check your angles too. Great job overall!

Nothin to worry about! Nice work, this is a clean, simplified lay in and it's really close in proportions. Adjustments are easy when you have a clean base established like this, keep up the good work!

Good job on this!

That's okay, don't forget that you'll improve each time you practice! You did a great job! I would suggest not worrying about details like the eyes just yet, just focus on identifying the shapes that make up the whole. Measuring the angles is super helpful and what I find helps me the most.

Cool shape design. I get boy wonder vibes from your Cillian. I would definitely recommend more attention to the neck and jaw relationships. Communicating his stronger jawline could depict his age more accurately. The musketeer’s neck is worth a second look.

Beginning to see ma mistakes

Third attempt after the demo