Critique - Cross Contour on Organic Forms

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Critique - Cross Contour on Organic Forms

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Stan Prokopenko
Let's review your Cross Contour on Organic Forms submissions. I'll be focusing on ginger blobs and animals for this one, and I'll cover your ginger root people next week.
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Jack H
2d
My second attempt at this project. Focusing a bit more on the underlying forms has helped me put down better looking lines in my opinion, and they look more 3D. Will definitely keep practicing this as I always struggle quite a bit with forms and volume.
Melanie Scearce
You're improving! Keep it up. What is that terrifying creature? 😮
Juice
5mo
Thanks for critique. I will now focus more on my line quality.I draw in my arm chair leaning back a bit. With a table easel on my home made armchair table. I have an illness and this setup make it possible for me to craft. But due to the armchair it limmits my shoulder movement abit and make it harder to draw with the shoulder. Do you have any advice on that? I hoped no one would notice 😅 probably just keep on doing it even if it feels a bit uncomfortable.
Aljoscha Adam
Thanks for the critique Stan, that solved some issues for me :) As far as pronouncing my name, you did a good job only that the "jo" in Aljoscha is pronounced like in "yolk" not like in "Josh" or something :D
Jyayasi (*Jay-o-she*)
Thanks for the critique. Yours and Patrick’s suggestions helped solve my confusion. Glad that you liked the biker turtle :)
Lealia Lealia
Thank you for sharing, they are so beautiful
Velvet Tetrault
My submission for the ginger root people has very wobbly lines, but I recently had shoulder replacement surgery on my dominant right arm, so I'm having a difficult time drawing with my arm.
Stan Prokopenko
sorry to hear that Velvet. That must be really rough..
@kindred99
5mo
great video, really cleared lot of doubts I had, looking forward to be critiqued in the upcoming videos! :D
Dave Lord
5mo
Thank you for the critique, that flamingo was a real head scratcher for me.
Johannes Schiehsl
I don't know why I struggle so much with line weights. I guess my mind is very literal and technical thats why it easier for me to apply strict line rules to mechanical drawings ... but on organic shapes I struggle. Thanks for the feedback tho.
Ricen
5mo
Thanks for the critique! I really enjoyed the ginger root assignment as well.
Pedro Branco
Thank you for the critique Stan.
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