again suggestions are welcome

my first attempt at what I would like to highlight ( the head part); didn't had a printout so traced the image on monitor. adding line weight makes sense, a lot depends on the light source

The Left picture is the Before the demo The right picture is the after watching the demo. I wanted to push the boundaries of the heavy lines because I wanted to experiment, also feedback is appreciated.

Very interesting in how dull, thick light lines still feel so much lighter than sharp, thick dark lines. The difference in perception is more noticeable than I thought, great video!

Before and after demo After demo tried to make a focus on internal details, but I don't feel that it turned out good

Before and after demo

Finally submitting.Done before watching the demo, but not too bad.

Fun assignement. I used a fountain pen to ink them. I explored and pushed some lines quite far. In the near future, I would like to become efficient with digital tools though. But traditional works very well for me.

Still working my way through these slowly, if anyone is hanging about giving feedback. Here is my attempt after watching the demo (and my first shot before the demo - on the right). I think the lineweight on the back part of the body might be a little light, and I maybe could have pushed the weight of the legs a little more, but I’m happy with the focus on the head. Any notes on the internal lines as well would be super welcome. Feeling mostly lost with those. Thanks!

these are my efforts feed back is appreciated sorry for some of the lines i have tremors in my hands

Hierarchy of importance. Any critique welcome

Forgive me for not drawing the hippo. LOL. I wanted to draw something that’s more fun! I think this is actually easier because there are less elements. So it’s quite easy to decide what’s important and what’s not.

I love that I can take my time with this course. It really helps since I have other responsibilities and projects.

My second rhino! After watching the demo I looked back in my sketchbook and found that my sketches don't have as much variety in line weight that they could have. I had only varied the value of the lines and any lines where I did try and go thicker, I still could have pushed it further. I've really enjoyed learning about line weight and I'm excited about improving on this!

This is easily my favourite assignment yet. I always struggled to understand what makes one line art feel better than another, even though I read up on it in many places. Doing this exercise really pulled those pieces together for me. Thank you!