Sup, I have a hard time with trying to find the rhythms of the arms when I'm drawing. Could anyone help me on how to find the rhythms of that. Another problem I have is how to draw the neck on my figures without them looking awkward or weird. Also could someone help spot my proportional errors that I've over looked, Thanks.
The first ones was me drawing along with Proko, while doing it myself. The Second one is just Doing it by myself. I wanted to try todo it myself and also make it bigger than it did before. Critique is appreciated (if you can see the photos I don't know how to make my photos high-quality, its probably my laptop I don't know, also this is like my first time ever using photoshop)
I drawn a lot of these and still failed terribly. But I see my mistakes on the Third try, I did worse than I have done on the Second try. The Mistakes of the Third Try: 1. Basically the right side of the Face, I've made the jaw line too long and it made most things on the right side to be misaligned because most of the stuff kind of depended on the Jaw line being in the correct spot. 2. The Eyes and the Nose, The right eye wasn't aligned to the left one(I think), it was also a little bit bigger and the shape of the right eye was incorrect. This is probably because I messed up the angle of how the eyes were tilted. Also the nose was way too short and I glanced over that on accident. 3. The Hat, I think its because I needed to make the Length of the hat shorter, because it looks too long. Also I made the Hat is wider than it actually is, Also some of the angles are too long and a little off for the hat. That's what I've got mostly out of the self critique, But could anyone tell me if there are more errors, I would like critique so I can improve when I do this next time.
This was after watching Proko’s demo. I explored with praying mantis because I liked the shapes and the claws and face. I tried making the claws and face interesting while trying to keep my line work good Aswell, could someone critique me if my shape design isn’t right, because I want to know what could I have changed or if I’ve added too much details.
When I look at everyone else’s assignments post, I think I didn’t follow what Proko was saying about simplifying. But I had fun, also could someone tell me if I did the assignment right or not and what I need to fix if I did thanks.
The left picture is before the demo the right picture is after watching the demo. I had fun with this one, but I realized I was afraid to be more bold with the darker shapes. So I went darker after watching the demo, Feedback is appreciated.
These where my first attempts on all 3. The snails shell, could anyone tell me how to construct it? it’s pretty hard for me because it’s at a weird angle. The shoe laces for the boot look on the left confused me a little. I gave the Camel a try but forgot to think about the proportions though, Feedback is appreciated.