Arman Jucutan
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A baby artist trying to learn to draw so that I can have the freedom to express myself more in my drawings
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3mo
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Hi everyone, here's my attempt. Any comments welcome
Arman Jucutan
3mo
Hello, I think the shading was done well and is actually the strongest part of your drawing. They convey the direction of the light source well and quality of the shade is good too for the most part. I think what your drawings are missing is structure and better proportions. I see a recurring issue here particularly with your 3rd drawing where the face seems like its on a flat plane. I think the features need to be better portrayed in perspective to help with this (refer to the structure of features video). You can also use your shading skills to better portray the structure of the features better too. Perhaps by shading according to the planes of the face. Finally I think there needs to be more careful work with the layin portion of your work. The proportions are a little off, particularly with your 2nd drawing; the forehead seems to go back more than your reference (reference is closer upright). Remember that a good drawing has a good layin. Great work!
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Hello Everyone, here is my work for the Loomis head section of the course. The first one I used the 3D model as reference, the second one is from imagination with the same angles as the first one, and then finally the third one is from references I found online. Please feel free to give critiques regarding my understanding of the Loomis method, any critiques is appreciated. Thank you
4mo
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Hello everyone, here is my full figure work. I'm looking for critique in drawing accuracy and shading. Keeping my drawing accurate to the reference have been an issue for me since I started this course so if you happen to find any issues in the linear layin stage please do let me know! As for shading, I don't think I completely captured the lighting from the reference. I think there are too many highlights and I think my final work doesn't clearly show where light is hitting her. Please let me know any areas of improvements or tips in my shading.
If there are any critical issues that you find in my work please do let me know too!
Thank you so much in advance, you're critiques are very much appreciated!
4mo
Hello everyone, here is my full figure work. I'm looking for critique in drawing accuracy and shading. Keeping my drawing accurate to the reference have been an issue for me since I started this course so if you happen to find any issues in the linear layin stage please do let me know! As for shading, I don't think I completely captured the lighting from the reference. I think there are too many highlights and I think my final work doesn't clearly show where light is hitting her. Please let me know any areas of improvements or tips in my shading.
If there are any critical issues that you find in my work please do let me know too!
Thank you so much in advance, you're critiques are very much appreciated!
7mo
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Hello everyone here is my handins for this lesson. please feel free to give your thoughts and critique
8mo
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Hello everyone, here are my submission for this lesson. Please let me know of any critiques and feedbacks. Thank you so much in advance
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Hello Folks, here is my submission for this lesson. Please let me know your thoughts and critiques.
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Hello everyone, here is my submission for the robo-bean assignment. This was a struggle but I hope you folks can give me some point of improvements/critique on my work. Before I move on to mannequinization or redo this assignment. Thank you!
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1yr
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Hello Proko Community, here is my work for the landmark chapter. I've been having trouble giving my figures some anatomy, is it mandatory to look at anatomy books to do this figure course if I havent bought the anatomy course yet? Finally, what exactly am I trying to achieve with this landmark exercise? Is it just to help with proportions and to keep my drawing accurate from the reference. Thank you!
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Hi folks, here is my submission for this assignment. Have I done a good job describing the animals using simple structures?
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Hello Proko community, here is my submission for this bean assignment. I am having trouble trying to show twist in my beans so I hope you guys are able to help point that out for me. Any general comments is always welcome! I am also having trouble with making my drawing accuracy, how should I practice being more accurate? does it come with time?
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1yr
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Hello everyone this is my first post in this website and it is about gesture. Here are the recent gesture drawings that I did and I was wondering if you guys think that my gestures are accurate? I am also struggling with making my gesture drawing 3D are there any mistakes in my gesture drawings below that make my drawings flat? Thank you!
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1yr
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Hello everyone this is my first post in this website and it is about gesture. Here are the recent gesture drawings that I did and I was wondering if you guys think that my gestures are accurate? I am also struggling with making my gesture drawing 3D are there any mistakes in my gesture drawings below that make my drawings flat? Thank you!
