Please critique it:)

Ah! I was so focused on boxes I missed out on the lines of action. Next time! I was also far more comfortable with a stick of compressed charcoal then a light pencil, but want to work on my fine line quality.

I keep coming back to this exercise because getting everything right at the same time like spotting the landmarks, getting the perspective right, drawing dynamic boxes, and doing so with clean lines is just such a challenge.

The Boxes with numbers represent the numbers on the ref images. - I think I did well on the bending and stretching of the boxes and the general orientation - The angles for pelvis and shoulders are pretty decent in my opinion Questions: -Number 11 (Twisting sitting pose): How do you draw twisted boxes? It was hard to wrap my head around it - How do you determine the distance between ribcage and pelvis? How do you determine the general size relationship between them? - I already forgot but how do I place the little traingle thing above the tailbone? Generally I am really content with the ribcages. They look way better than my gestures. Would appreciate answers/feedback on my questions

having a hard time maintaining clarity when adding the connection so I kept it to just the boxes. Feedback appreciated. I definitely found this more challenging than the bean.

I went through this class long ago, and I'm in a season where it's time to revisit it. 🥰 I'm a casualty of the "drawing from the right side of the brain" era, being intermediate to advanced in portraits from reference, but not so good at imagination. Well, after studying for years, tonight was a break through for me. I feel like I actually could start to see the rotation of the subject in my mind's eye and then translate that to paper. I can see some things off... still it feels like a jump for me! Please, any critique appreciated - I'm ready to grow!

Some of these could be better, but it's a start!

Critique is appreciate

My Robo beans. I did the first set, then watched the critique vid, then did the second set with a little more data in my brain.

Let me know if I did the boxes right. I am a beginner so I am not sure if I did it right. There are times that I just know it is wrong but I dont know how to draw the box in a way that is correct.

I need some help here, how do you make a robo bean of this pose? I can figure this one out, please I'd really appreciate it

A few robo beans. I struggled a bit at first but I found it easier to start by drawing the entire torso as one long rectangle. I still get lost when it comes to the pelvic area, particularly when it is foreshortened...

Some practice with robo beans. The key is to maintain both gesture and structure

Here are some beans I drew after watching all the robobean material. My linework got messy as I tried to find the right angles. Feels like you have to be more precise with the robobean compared to the regular bean.

Not gonna lie, I'm finding it tricky to get my head around the Robo Bean! Any help appreciated. Thanks in advance :)

Here is a handful of my attempts. Feedback appreciated!

Here's my attempt at the Robo Bean. Didn't use charcoal like I did for the Landmarks submission as it just got too messy, so I hope this is better! I have put the drawings/references side by side in order. Had particular difficulty with twisting and foreshortening when following along with Stan's examples, so I included some here. As always critique is most welcomed :)

Robo Bean Day 2