I just made one sketch again and tried to keep in mind Marshalls advice and it really helped to get more definition 😊 And I added some shading because it was fun

The boxes in the torso seem correct to me, keep exercise your line quality it will get better. You can also apply the "think from a box" technique to the arms and legs. It could help not to focus too hard on your contours and think more in big easy shapes which they say in the critique video. Not all lines need to have the same thickness. I think it will help to play with different line thickness and will improve the quality of your sketches. Hope this is helpful 💚 this is my first try to give advice here to someone else 🙈

Looks like a good base already. I think what would help you the most is to be more confident with your lines and the general big shape and some lines can have more intensity on the general shape.

Awesome work! I think the drawings are going great! You can really tell the tip and tilt of the masses, i think you've simplified well, I don't think I have a good enough eye to critique your work, i would just like to encourage you to keep going! I like seeing your notes to yourself! Are you working digitally or traditional? Its hard to tell!

Really nice! You have a solid grasp of the exercise. Great job with the imagination poses. Isn't it exciting to be able to do that?! - I think there is room for more gesture. Start with a gesture drawing, then as you add the forms, try to add them with gesture in mind. You want the lines you draw to be part of a flow that connects the body and leads the viewer through the pose. Maybe you could think of every line you put down as a gesture line, but you use them to draw a geometric forms. So you draw structure, but are still in the gesture mindset. To get stronger gesture, it might help to watch this video Sketching from Animal Footage. This one is also great Drawing Demo by Glenn Vilppu - I think you could emphasize when an object moves toward you by making it larger. Same thing with parts that move away from you by making them smaller. To get a stronger feeling of space it could help to keep the ground plane in mind. - In the running pose, I think the legs are too much in a split, if you intend for it to be realistic. Also, you could foreshorten the furthest leg more. I tend to do the same mistake in my drawings. Foreshortening doesn't come natural, so keep an extra eye on that. It helps me to imagine touching the space the figure is in. If I were to place my hand with it's back side against the figures belly, then move it in space in the direction I want the foot to be, I land in a place different from where you've placed the foot. Hope this helps :) Keep up the good work 💪😎

Wow, really nice! Perfect line quality and mannequinization.

I think you have done a fine job.

Hi @Josh mcgrath, great job! The mannequins feel 3D and are very gestural! I also think they are enjoyable to look at on an abstract level; the lines have a nice calligraphic quality that I find beautiful! I'll try to be really picky and see if there is anything to correct: - In #2 & 6 I found a crosscontour that I might have changed (see paintover) Hope this helps :)

These are really good