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@rigloo
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3yr
added comment inFigure Drawing Critiques – Mannequinization
some mannequins. Would appreciate the feedback. I have been practicing this for a few weeks now. I don't have anything against mr Proko, I think these videos are great. But perhaps specifically for this section i feel like I was not given sufficient instruction in how to complete it. I try to watch carefully what mr Proko does in his examples, but since there is no explanation or commentary it is hard to follow along.
@emmahubner
2yr
I can see the robo bean very clearly in yours which is great! One thing you could do is compare where the limbs are in relation to each other. The drawing in the top right could have more foreshortening to show the left leg is coming toward the viewer; comparing and measuring where the other leg is can be helpful. Another thing I noticed is your heads look too small and spherical. One thing I do (because I struggled with making my heads the wrong size) is sometimes I draw a box that a head could fit in. I feel like your doing a good job of using cylinders for the body and it looks more 3D as a result. Keep up the good work! :)
@supersmith
3yr
I think you have done a fine job.
@soronder
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3yr
For me the jump from the "robo bean" to the "mannquinization" is a big one. It would have helped to have additional lessons in between to practice the shapes for the different body parts. It would also have helped if Stan would explain what he is doing during the session. I only started with this chapter. Maybe it works out in the end.
@rigloo
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3yr
Some 30 second gestures. Would appreciate any feedback. Trying to improve line quality a bit so that it doesnt look so messy.
Hey pretty good!I think you did pretty good on most of these,you exaggarate the pose of each one to make it more gestural.
I don't think I have any critique since you seemed to already be aware of your line quality,so yeah keep going,try to control the pencil better via normal exercise or copying master like Jeff Watts (example below)
