Grace Mounce
Grace Mounce
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Currently relearning how to draw. Happy to give others advice and grateful for the advice that comes my way!
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@lwel
Blance+mannequization. My proportions aren't always right I notice when putting side to side haha.
Grace Mounce
Hi @lwel, very nicely done! I'm no expert, but it looks to me like you've got a handle on mannequinization. I also like that you're dropping the line down from the torso to check for balance--great idea! May I suggest for the lower section of the arm (is that called the forearm? I should know this but I'm not sure...), you could break it up into a cylinder for the part closer to the elbow and a box wedged into it for the wrist portion. That's just one idea, because I remember Marshall Vandruff suggesting in the critique video for the mannequinization lesson that it might be good to think of all the forms as boxes, like you've drawn in a lot of the forearms. One last thing: the hands in these look so good!!
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Grace Mounce
Hello everyone! It's been about a year since I worked on this class, but I'm picking it up again. I wanted to ask you all if the invented poses look real and "action-y" enough...or perhaps they look stiff or fake? Much appreciation for you all! Sincerely, Grace :)
Grace Mounce
@Kyle Spencer This is a nice portrait! I like that you're beginning to find the 3D forms in this guy's face. If I were you, I might keep working on seeing and drawing 3D shapes, like Stan suggests in lesson 3 of Figure Drawing Fundamentals: https://www.proko.com/course-lesson/structure-basics-making-things-look-3d/assignments You might even think of the whole head as one big box. You could start by drawing a box that the head would fit into, then draw lines on one side of the box that will help you place the features. Because you'll draw the lines to match the way the top and bottom edges of the box converge, you'll be able to put the features in proper perspective. I hope this helps, and I apologize if I'm just giving you advice you've already heard before! Keep up the good work! :)
Grace Mounce
Whoa Shelvs these are incredible!!! Thank you for inspiring me today :D
@nick_laze
I know my lines are really messy, that's because i'm trying to use a different grip with the pencil. Could someone give me some feedback on the gesture? Thanks
Grace Mounce
@nick_laze I think these look amazing! Here's a minor point: a few of the legs are starting to lose the alternating curves for contours (like Proko says in the premium video, a lack of alternating curves can make your figures look like snowmen, or maybe a marshmallow man). I attached a draw-over...I hope it's more clear. But again, this is nit-picking. Because they look fluid and forceful!
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Grace Mounce
Hi everyone! I think I'm getting a little better but still struggling with the Robo Bean. This pose in particular I'm having a hard time with...The model seems very close to a side view here, so I'm not sure if I should show any front or back planes for the ribcage and torso. I did 4 different attempts at this pose. Do any of them look right to any of you? Thank you for taking the time to check out this post! Good luck with the Robo Bean everyone! Sincerely, Grace Mounce
Grace Mounce
Hi everyone! So, I really struggled with the Robo Bean. I'd play Stan's example videos, pausing them at each example just before he started drawing. I'd draw the Robo Bean for that pose, and then I'd watch to see how Stan did it. It seemed like every time, I got the angle and the orientation of the boxes wrong. Maybe I need to go back and do the examples again. Here are some I did on my own. Often, I'd try the same pose twice to see if I could do it any better. If any of you can spot some of the mistakes I'm making here, I'd be very grateful for the feedback! Well wishes to all you artists! Sincerely, Grace Mounce
Grace Mounce
@Shelvs Fleurima You are very generous with your time and effort to give me such good feedback. Thank you a million! You're a fantastic artist, so encouragement/critique from you means a lot.
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Grace Mounce
Hi, everyone! I did the landmarks assignment. After I followed each of Proko's examples, I drew from a reference photo that captured the body from a similar angle (after the first one, I found a muscular back; after the fourth one, I found an extreme scapula position; etc.). If anyone could give me some feedback on how I did, I would so much appreciate your time and attention! Did I place the landmarks right (particularly those tricky scapulae?) Also, I have another question that's been bugging me, and maybe I'm being way too anal about it...When Stan draws the landmarks, he lines up the PSIS with the iliac crest. On the "Landmarks of the Human Body" diagram included in the premium lesson, the PSIS is a little below the iliac crest. Which one is right? Does it really matter? Thank you everybody! I wish you all good fortune on this challenging (at least for me!) lesson! May you all learn a lot :) Sincerely, Grace Mounce
Grace Mounce
I've got a few questions about this one, and I was hoping somebody might help me clear my head. In Stan's drawing, the angle from the teres major to the elbow seems off (I pointed it out with the red line in this screenshot). I followed Stan but measured the angle differently; but I don't know if this is actually correct because it makes the guy look like he has a really long back. Is the teres major lower on the back than I think it is? Also, Stan marks the iliac crest so it lines up with the PSIS; but in the Landmarks of the Human Body diagram that comes with this lesson, the iliac crest is a little higher than the PSIS. When I draw my own landmarks from different photos, should I line these points up like Stan does? Please forgive my real "correcting" tone. I definitely trust Stan's knowledge of anatomy way more than I do my own! But I'm just confused about what goes where. Thank you all! Sincerely, Grace Mounce
Kaily House
Here are my assignments from this lesson! I have a hard time connecting all the shapes. Am I not breaking into into small enough structures?
Grace Mounce
Hi @Kaily House , these look lovely--nice foreshortening on the back of that polar bear! Also, I'm looking at your cylinders on the first page, and the top ellipses look nice and round (which I should have been doing for mine!) On a few of the bottom ellipses of the cylinders, as well as some of the cross-contours on the cylinders in the animals, it looks like the corners of the ellipse are starting to flatten out to a point. If you round those corners a little more, I think it will help. But other than that, nicely done!
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