Martha Muniz
Martha Muniz
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Eryk Świątek
Martha Muniz
Great value choices! Try doing more studies but without using linework to separate the subject matter (like outlining the people, chairs, boats, etc.) so instead the focus can be on how the values themselves break up the picture. Sometimes subjects will be combined with others (like how the standing man's face blends with the same value as the background) or be broken up into different values (like how the same man's face has some white light hitting the side). Thinking more about the abstract shapes of the picture is a way to examine the compositional and value choices made by the artist more directly.
Carlos Pérez
I discovered that zorn or Rembrandt have a clear 2 value separation than for example Rockwell or frazzeta
Martha Muniz
Lovely studies! And good observation in regards to how artists utilize values differently. Rembrandt is known for that high contrast in lights vs darks to create a dramatic quality, vs someone like Rockwell who really makes the most of the midtone section for a highly-lit feeling, but can lead to a 2 value separation being trickier.
hobodios
Asked for help
I really tried my best to take a good picture I couldn't decide which one was better so I'm putting 2 (if somebody has tips for taking good pictures I would LOVE to hear them) Anyway I did all of the squares with a 6b it was REALLY hard to control the pressure sensitivity but fun nonetheless I still have a lot to improve so I'm gonna be doing this for a while before moving on!
Martha Muniz
Beautiful consistency with your shading! I do think it started quite lighter to the point where the dark values got compressed at the end (which, given it was done entirely in 6B means your value control is amazing!). I think if you used your current #5 (or #4 in the second photo, whichever you deem most accurate to real life) as your 2nd lightest value instead, it would allow for a more even gradation between steps. Hope this helps :)
Chauncey Holder
this was fun but also challenging to do with trying to keep different varying of pressures.
Martha Muniz
Nice consistency! I think it looks pretty good, just watch out for the transition between the middle greys and the darkest section, especially between the 2B & 4B for the top scale and #6 & #7 for the bottom scale, as it seems like a larger jump than the rest. I think you can try using a blend of the two pencils for this transition area, or just add on more layers of the 2B and use some slight erasing to lighten the 4B. I would also recommend aiming to take a picture with more even lighting, so either fully in the direct light or entirely within a consistent shadow area (the camera usually can adjust accordingly, but you may want to play around with the exposure settings). That way your awesome work can be seen the best :)
Maestro
Asked for help
The lower one looks much better. Would be thankful for a critique.
Martha Muniz
Hi! The darker end of the scales are pretty good, but keep an eye out for the transition from the lightest square to the middle greys. I think lightening square #2 for both scales will create a more even transition since they currently appear darker than squares #3. Once you have that down, see if you can push the middle three values in the top scale, since they appear rather similar-- so lightening #4 and darkening #6. I hope this helps :)
Kay
Asked for help
Before and after the demo for the CSI snail and boots.
Martha Muniz
Definitely see more confident simplification choices and linework. Great work!
SAHI VLOGS
And the journey begins , tell me guys what i can go better 😓
Martha Muniz
Hi there! I would recommend starting the light grey values even lighter, so there's more of a gradual and even progression from the lightest to darkest values.
@banane
before and after watching his explanation, definitely helped a lot :D
Martha Muniz
Great improvement, looks awesome!
@brimarie
That was a great exercise. It also stimulates the imagination and I noticed that it's not that easy to come up with things... Any feedback and suggestions for improvement are very welcome:-)
Martha Muniz
Looks great! Love how you even got multiple rounded objects into the drawing. If you're up for more practice, I encourage you to try it with different placements for the horizon line, like a lower horizon line with at least a couple of objects placed above it, so there's more variety in the challenge.
@androida
Asked for help
Boxes, boxes everywhere :D
Martha Muniz
Looks awesome!
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