Activity Feed

@lucagray
•
2d
added comment inProject - Rhythms
Asked for help
An attempt was made 😖 I always psyche myself out before attempting any of the assignments and then it takes me a good while to actual start. I think I put this off for like a month. 😖 I don't think I've fully grasped Rhythms but there is at least one element from each drawing that I quite like and I think it's just a case of practicing. I think most of all I need to be a bit more relaxed about it. 😅
•
1d
This is already such a great start!! I think you did a good job simplifying the poses into the main rhythms while keeping the energy of the poses. Definitely keep going, you're on the right track! A bit of advice to keep an eye out for next time would be to watch out for any symmetry, especially in the limbs. Keeping the arms/legs the same width or starting the lines at the same point (pinching the joints) can obstruct some of the flow, so finding ways to incorporate more asymmetry can help keep the energy moving. For example, finding a variation in width, tapering from wide to narrow, or making a 'chain' by alternating the stop/start points of the lines can bring more energy.
@lucagray
•
2mo
Asked for help
I enjoyed this project and the drawings I produced but I know I wasn't following the exercise properly 😖 Even after watching the demo and trying again I think I'm too skittish with deviating from what I see and I'm not great identifying the directions and pushing them. But if nothing else I felt it was good exercise for loosening up a little and enjoying the process! (Even if it wasn't quite the right process 😅)
(My brother also did some seals but he did his own thing with them! Thought I'd add them too because they're a lot of fun! His are the graphite drawings.)
•
2mo
It looks to me like you're heading in the right direction! You used a good variety of CSI lines and made interesting, asymmetrical shapes. Always room for improvement in everyone's work but these are looking good. I think your self-assessment is spot on. Keep trying to identify that line of action and see how you can push it in interesting ways.
Also, your brother's drawing are adorable! Great job you two 👍
@lucagray
•
3mo
Asked for help
I made the face a bit too narrow I think but overall for a first attempt I think it's not too bad!
Ok so after watching the critique video I decided to try again and also to give level 2 a try because I thought it might help me understand what the key shapes were. Sorry I know the photos of the drawings aren't good and I ran out of steam to darken the lines 😖
I really think this is a worthwhile exercise but I think I need to try and study what other people have done because it just doesn't feel like I'm quite getting it. Like the tiger looks like a bear or a dog no matter what I do 😅
@lucagray
•
8mo
Asked for help
I'll be honest I'm not really sure I did this project properly but I really struggled to find artists that had pieces I was excited to draw that had interesting lines. And I feel like I chose two artists that don't really have a style that aligns with what we've been taught so far as the lines tend to be deliberately squiggly. But it wasn't a total bust - I did try sketching with coloured pencils like Nico Marlet which I found I quite liked. I'm also not sure if it was allowed but I think I would have preferred studying artists that post fanart rather than industry recognised artists? It's inktober so there's lots of cool stuff but I wasn't sure if that would be considered a master study? But I've definitely been doing a lot of that for my own sketches and I've enjoyed it! But long story short, I'm glad this assignment is done.
@lucagray
•
9mo
Asked for help
First attempt overall I knew I wasn't doing something right but the demo made it much clearer, helps if you actually look at the photo! 😖, so second attempt is a lot better. The light and shadow one I was pretty confused about the contrast areas but the demo I think suggests you sort of just need to make a decision on it and go for it so I made a little key to follow. In hindsight I maybe would have changed them about slightly but I think understand the theory even if not the actual execution still needs some work!
Anawin L.
•
10mo
Asked for help
Here is my pre demo work for the Level 1 project. For both the penguin and the robot girl, I used their heads as a reference for scale. However, when it came to the hands, I struggled with determining the correct proportions and had difficulty with construction and scaling. I would greatly appreciate any recommendations or feedback. Thank you.
All three look amazing! I think the proportions on the hand looks good! Maybe it's just a case of picking an element like you did for the other two and using that to judge the proportions? Like the pointer finger or the wrist? Or just roughly boxing it out like he did in the last assignment?
Asked for help
Here are all the drawings at once for the level 1 project, the first ones of each drawing is pre demo. I feel like am getting a little better at the S and C curves, but I will definitely have to do some line practice regardless. I do feel like some of my sketches pre demo look a little better, but that might be cause of the added detail? Not sure if that is the case tho. I will try the level 2 project as well, it looks really challenging and fun, and I am already collecting some images. If there are any points of improvements in these drawings, I appreciate any and all feedback
I love the penguins you've drawn! He has such a strong energy! The hands are really good too! And the difference between your first and second VR girl is really impressive!
@lucagray
•
9mo
Asked for help
Major takeaways after watching the demo was looking out for rhythms and actually looking at the whole shape, even if you can't see it, rather than just the lines. I think the hand is my favourite.
@lucagray
•
9mo
Asked for help
I think the boots ended up better than the snail! Altho I really psyched myself and put it off. The second attempt at the boots I think might be less in proportion because I was trying to follow his advice in the demo and focus on confident lines. But I very much lack confidence 😅