Hi Jack! As far as I can tell, you git the boxes leaning in the right directions. Nice work! I traced over the models to see how I might draw them if that’s helpful. No big issues though. The only thing I see that might help is the lines between the boxes could be given more thought. Push this idea of ‘push’ and ‘stretch’ to push these beans to the next level. You don’t have to make it as extreme as I did in my drawing, but keep in mind that it’s better to push too far than not enough here. That’s all I got. I hope it’s helpful. You drew some great robo-beans!

I think they look pretty good

These drawings have plenty of structural integrity! Not to gestural at all! The only thing I notice that I would adjust anything on is this last drawing, Since her spine is curved back, I might adjust the boxes to follow that. Everything else looks great! Nice work!

Hi Ignacio, I can tell your frustrated, invested your time and money into something you hoped would help. I just want to offer a different perspective, not to change your mind, but maybe to invite a deeper conversation. I have been going through the same course and yeah, gesture, beans, robo beans......its hard lol. I have definitly had moments where I was like "damnnn why is stan gestures, beans, etc look way better??? Why does my attempts look like trash lmao. The comparisions, the doubts, the fears, all of that set in....but let me remind you...I realized this course isnt about getting something polished right away. Its more like learning a new visual language, piece by piece. We all didnt speak perfect language right away when we were babies....we started saying gibberish but eventually! we started talking, reading, writing to the point where I am here talking to you lol. I also noticed you have not posted any images of your work yet, which I am curious why. That would have been helpful for the proko team and others to give you constructive criticism. Not to break you down but to build you up. I found that once I started sharing, even if it was messy or awkward, I began to get the kind of feedback that helped unlocked things for me. So again, I am not here to invalidate your experience, and maybe you won't ever read this, but I hope to anyeone else whos struggling with this....give it one more shot, and see if sharing some of your work changes the experience. We are all in this grind together Ignacio! T.P

Well, I tried my best. Rib cage of the figure in frontal view is definitely to wide, but I'm pretty satisfied with the perspective. In my experience, when it comes to establish the two blocks for pelvis and torso, it's easier to first determine the plane closest to the viewer. That is a good starting point to see, how each block is situated in space. It's still hard though ...