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5mo
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First time posting here and while I was happy with how the pear turned out for the Level 1 project, I feel like the Level 2 portrait would be better. Any feedback would be appreciated, thanks!
Rahul Paul
5mo
Great job!
For level 2 , prominent boundaries b/w different value cells will help you to analyze and organize values better. I see near the neck region, near jawline and right collar ( in image) it's not prominent. Gradient is there.
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I tried to avoid as drawing many flat surfaces to things which has volumes, as possible, to give the drawing more depth, keeping in mind @Martha Muniz 's feedback.
Also I tried to use line weight as a tool to divide my drawing into 3 image planes for added depth.
Finally tried to render this Akira Fanart a little for fun. Hope that doesn't violate the guidelines mention.
Your feedbacks and critiques are highly appreciated. Feel free to share your views.
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5mo
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Level 1 submission.
I'd really appreciate your valuable critique.
5mo
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Level 2 submission
Please provided your valuable feedbacks and critiques.
5mo
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Level 1
Hand Mannequins
Surprising the 1st drawing went off better in terms of proportions and overall gesture. But other two didn't go so well.
Please provide any critique or feedback as how can i improve in this aspect. Your feedbacks are valuable to me.
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6mo
Hello @Art Stark !
Firstly I want to tell I really like short notes you always write in your sketches. The boogie woogie one inspired me. :)
Now coming to the feedback...
1. You're trying to work with simple shapes and that's smart but the shapes are lacking perspective and intersection solidity in some cases. Eg. The face in the middle.
2. For the Mignola study, I should not comment on the shading because it's basic drawing course but anyway.. Again focus on simple shapes and defining forms correctly will help you to invent shadows with better believability. I could see you didn't put form light on thigh portion but it should've been there bcz both legs can't be in cast shadow of the jacket. As he's walking. So don't shy out.. Experiment more with forms and most importantly have fun with pencil!!
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As promised, here is my second attempt at 1-point perspective room but build from imagination this time.
Completely done free hand without using ruler.
To suggest the horizon.. There's a line suggestion outdoor.
Critiques are highly welcomed.
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This is my first attempt at 1 point perspective. I was standing in a queue at hospital. Tried to do a rough sketch from the real life.
I hope this doesn't come under the rule of copying from a photo. But next time I'd try to be brave enough to build a simple 1 point room from imagination.
Critiques are highly appreciated.
6mo
Great take on it @Art Stark , with all the variations here. About the line weight decision, are you trying to focus on shape outline here?
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