Stage 1 - Exploration Sheet: This is the initial stage where you are exploring and experimenting with the design. Try to show evidence of structure volumes, believable anatomy, and poses that feel true to your source material (which are apes in this case).
Stage 2 - Finished Design: Once you've found a design that works well in the exploration stage, refine it to a more finished state. This does not necessarily mean full color or setting it in a specific environment. It could simply be a cleaned-up line design where the shapes are more defined and not as loose or rough as in the exploration stage.
The assignment should demonstrate effort and intention to push beyond "good enough." Don't settle for the bare minimum, prove your capabilities with each task.
Compare your final design to a design you created before you started the course. This will serve as a control group to help you see the improvement in your work after taking the course.
For this assignment I tried combining the ape with…. frogs. The first stage has helped me explore and study the animals loosely without worrying too much to make it like the actual reference picture. The last picture is the finished design. Will definitely implement the exploration stage for more creatures in the future. Thank you David for the course and the feedback!
This is my stage 2 drawing.
@David Colman Thank you so much for this course! Especially the feedback was invaluable. I think of all the drawingbooks and courses i have taken so far(and most of them where great), this one has helped me the most! I am very much looking forward to future courses. I personally hope for big cats or bears (but I really like all animals).
After I added lion studies to the ape and monkey studies I started again to make sketches for my lion/mandrill cross-over: The Mandrillion. :)
So the first picture was trying out to find the right posture. It was a little tricky since on the one hand I wanted it to feel really dynamic - like you are being attacked. On the other hand when you face the mandrillion head-on you can't see much of his features (like his lion like legs). So I added a little explanatory sketch depicting the length of the arms and his lion legs. I hope this is showing some progress compared to the other sketch, where you said the mandrill and the lion are too close to each other.
@David Colman are you planning to do more classes? I really enjoyed this one.
Regards!
Stage 1 ... some exploration on animals with "bubble" parts(fish bird) and different kind of apes/primates (mostly baboon). Some tests of combinations.
These are my explorations of an orang utan - anglerfish. On the last picture are the referencepictures i used for the breakdowns. On the first page are the breakdowns.
@David Colman I tried to follow your feedback to really workout the forms and to take the necessary time, to take it a step further, and i think it is very helpful!
Looking at my explorations now I think that in some of them the attachment of the legs and pelvis to the upperbody seems a bit weird, I will give more thought to that in future drawings.
I think I will start to work on a finished design next. Any Feedback would be very welcome!
Hey Linus- apologies for the delay in replying. I admire your challenging combo but its the right way to go. Two completely different species.I think you should go more ape dominant with the head being more angler in structure- maybe a fin down the back and def the lightbulb trait of that source. I am really speaking to the second page lower left. I think you have something there. Spend more time exploring that one and take your time. It only takes one to get it working- but to get it right it takes many explorations . Look at more orangutang poses to help mitigate the oddness of the pelvis. And since I suggest keeping the body more ape like it should help. Find the flow- search for harmony so as to avoid frankensteining...
Thank you Samuel for the personal comment. Glad you liked the course. There are more in the planning stages. I think in your final piece you lost some structure- screen right shoulder
hmmm Okay but it very formulaic computer approach of creating iterations. Its not realy exploring as much as just drawing over and changing minor details. Find it...draw it form various angles... dont lock it in this early. You cut yourself off at knees by approaching variations this way. ITs okay to be uncomfortable and unsure- thats how you grow
I will submit my stage one in the next week or so! Here is my stage 2... Thank you for the course, it has been fantastic! I am sure I will be revisiting this course frequently in the weeks, months and years to come! Thank you!
Well your last combo sketch was great I would like to see your explorations. I do think you have the skill to make a more dynamic pose that is fully alive and more engaging. This is good but I know youre better. The tattooing etc is nice but it feels flat And the expression can be more engaging even in his resting position. Seated poses can tell stories too. Whats he feeling- whats his story...
David,
Hereby my final assignment. I’ve chosen a comic style, for comics is the destination I am aiming for. Drawing two characters make the drawing more interesting, I like to see some story emerging.
Still a lot to learn, but your lessons and the assignments have helped me a lot in growing as an artist, so thanks a lot for sharing your knowledge and giving us the critiques we needed.
LOVE the narrative.. and youre doing what you want. When dealing with a little more of a cartoon it still needs to possess some evidence of basic structure( like where is his neck - even from this angle you might see a "hook" communicated with sterno muscle to pit of neck- by "hook" I mean a 2D trick to hook or connect two forms together) Also form design- especially with more cartoon styles the forms take on a specific design and not just drawn. Glad you liked the course. I love your loose sketches- so much life
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Create two stages of a design
Stage 1 - Exploration Sheet: This is the initial stage where you are exploring and experimenting with the design. Try to show evidence of structure volumes, believable anatomy, and poses that feel true to your source material (which are apes in this case).
Stage 2 - Finished Design: Once you've found a design that works well in the exploration stage, refine it to a more finished state. This does not necessarily mean full color or setting it in a specific environment. It could simply be a cleaned-up line design where the shapes are more defined and not as loose or rough as in the exploration stage.
The assignment should demonstrate effort and intention to push beyond "good enough." Don't settle for the bare minimum, prove your capabilities with each task.
Compare your final design to a design you created before you started the course. This will serve as a control group to help you see the improvement in your work after taking the course.