Should I have shown more wrapping lines around the forms of the camel? Looking forward to the critique video.

I'm not sure I simplified enough. Should I lump more of the individual segments of the contour of a shape into one making a larger C curve, S curve, or straight line? Or, is the work I've done sufficient? Also, after watching one of the Draftsmen podcast I didn't know I was being a bad student by not asking questions when requesting a critique. I will make sure I ask questions from this point forward.

While drawing the forms and trying to make them flow together I assume we still have to use straight lines to indicate the bony areas of the anatomy?

Attempt after watching portrait demo.