Iiiik
Iiiik
Owner of a bachelor degree in philosophy, and wannabe artist in my free time.
Iiiik
Been a while since I haven't asked for criticism since it's a bit harder to get any for this course than with the gesture one, but this exercise was basically my entryway to shading since I was too chicken to ever try it before, so oh well, I'm a beginner at this so I must at least try and get feedback! Gotta admit that I perhaps experimented way too much over the second assignement and it ended up looking... Peculiar to say the least. But I'd say I'm fairly satisfied with the other three, while I can still obviously see a lot of areas to improve. Any feedbacks that might help me towards that path are very much welcome, thanks in advance!
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Kazuhiro Fujita. It's one of my art dreams to someday be noticed by him somehow. ... Idk how exactly but hey a man can dream!
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I hope to be a manga or comic artist in the future. I've started drawing because I wanted to give life to the stories I keep telling myself when I'm bored, and I wish I could picture them like the artists that inspire me do.
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Sako Toshio, Kazuhiro Fujita, Hiroya Oku, Baba Yasushi, David Finch and Marc Brunet are probably my biggest inspirations, among many others.
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It took me quite some time to achieve a smoother motion compared to the square forms I was using at first but I think that I'm finally starting to get a grip at this exercise. Should I move on to the Mannequinization exercise or give this one a few more tries to solidify my practice of it? Any constructive criticism is very much welcome as always!
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Hi, I just noticed that I didn't request feedback for my bean practices yet, and I've gotta admit that this is one with which I've got some troubles. As time goes on, it gets easier to get the ellipses I want in one stroke, but the first tries were rough. There's definitely improvement to be done concerning the motion of the twist, and I'd be more than glad to take any advice I could get. Thanks in advance!
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Honestly, this week started very rough. I don't know what exactly I was thinking with my first tries but I'm just as much shocked at how giving more thoughts to the landmarks started improving my figures immensely by the end of the week. I'm definitely gonna go further with this exercise and try to add more discipline to it because I feel like I really found something that I was missing for a while now.
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Hi! About two weeks ago I posted a previous request for feedback here and I was advised to work on my 30sec figure drawings so that I pay less attention to the contours and anatomy. I've been practicing it daily ever since, yet, altough progress has been made, I feel like something is still missing. Am I forgetting something in particular? Thanks in advance for any additional feedback!
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Tried my hand at this for one week and I think I made some progresses but the round forms are still a bit hard for me. Definitely a tough exercise but I loved making some of them such as the bat and the deer. Well, any advice is welcome, thanks in advance!
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I've been trying myself at figure drawing (2min ones there) for a few days now yet I feel like I'm not improving much and sticking to the same mistakes. I've been trying my hardest to ignore contours and solely focus on the movement but it gets pretty difficult to figure out once the poses gets more "clustered". Any advice on how I could sort things out?
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Thanks for all the very constructive answers. It is as I feared, I'm still too unconfident about using simpler lines. I will probably try to lower the timer to force myself to focus more on those.
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Tried my hand at these. I think I'm mainly concerned about proportions issues there but any additional criticism is welcome!
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Been trying this exercise for a few days now and I feel like I'm slowly getting the gist of it but I get into troubles as soon as the "top" of the bean leans forward. I feel like I'm overlooking the gesture to focus on how the form interacts with each other.
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