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Steve Lenze
added comment inProko beginner's course imagination sketch feedback request
19d
I like your cartoony style and the poses for the rabbits.
You do need to loosen up, or your drawings will end up stiff. As we add details and a nice line around our sketches, they tend to stiffen up, This is why loosening up and pushing the gesture can give our drawings a better chance of not being stiff.
I did a couple of sketches to show you what I mean, I hope it helps :)
Christopher Lebreault
11d
@Steve Lenze thanknyou for your feedback! I took your advice and tried to implement it here. He feels slightly off balance but much better than my previous attempt
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23d
Hey! Here is my 2nd attempt at this assignment (technicality 2nd and 3rd) I am having difficulty grasping the "messy" line part of this project. I draw through, look for rhythms and shapes, etc. but I have a strong habit of drawing "clean lines" if I see a mistake (line not where they are supposed to go or got a shape wrong, a proportion error I noticed) I will go in and correct it. Maybe I am misunderstanding and my sketches are what the assignment is looking for or perhaps I am not getting something.
the first two rabbit pages are studying refs, the 3rd is exploring and the last rabbit is my final. the two jackal pages are self-explanatory. In this assignment, I tried my hardest to be messy/exploratory and not concerned with rightness so I included a "sketch" I did while having fun with level 1 to show what my usual sketches look like
(I posted this exact thing in the class's comment section but I find it not very active very often SO I am here as well)
Hey! Here is my 2nd attempted at this assignment (technicality 2nd and 3rd) I am have a hard time grasping the "messy" line part of this project. I draw through, look for rhythms and shapes, etc. but i have a strong habit of drawing "clean lines" if I see a mistake (line not where they are supposed to go or got a shape wrong, a proportion error i noticed) I will go in and correct it. Maybe I am misunderstanding and my sketches are what the assignment is looking for or maybe I am not getting something.
the first two rabbit pages are studying refs, the 3rd it exploring and the last rabbit is my final. the two jackal pages are self explanatory. In this assignment I tried my hardest to be messy/exploratory and not concerned with rightness so I included a "sketch" i did while having fun with level 1 to show what my usual sketches look like
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For some reason, if i get a prompt and attack it with no reference, I can actually draw and somewhat enjoy the finished product. If i have to find references, it is alot harder to draw from imagination. I had fund with this and i like the concept of what my finished piece was aiming for, the execution was fun too but not all that happy with it ( i do not hate it and it was real fun to draw)
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Pre demo attempt at the three references.
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I found the snail to be leagues easier than the boots ðŸ˜
Hey everyone! Enjoyed doing this. Any crits would be great! Also wondering how to avoide smudging all over the place while drawing?
Tyia!
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My first attempt at the pear. Generally happy with it, def see some spot that can be improved on
Hi all, my covid got so bad I had to be hospitalized today (asthma = owch), but I've gotten out of the hospital now and should be able to do a video for tomorrow! Life throws funny things at me, haha. At least my arm still works!
oh no! I am sorry to hear this! Glad to see you are okay, most important thing!
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