Tuija Kuismin
Tuija Kuismin
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Tuija Kuismin
Thanks for this demo, it was an absolute joy. I have to tell you it calmed me down, a lot. I love how it ties up everything we've learned so far on this course and after watching this I felt like yeah, I can do this stuff! Since frustration has not been a stranger to me during this year and a half, as I believe is the case with most students here. Along with what all I've learned since the beginning of this course, I learned from this demo that patience is the key. I was also reminded of Jeff Watts' demo in which he imprinted "think first, then draw" in my brain. I've gotten so much out of the perspective section of this course that... wow. I cannot wait for the shading part.
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Florian Haeckh
1st image are the first 5 poses Proko provided. 2nd image are torsos from sketchdaily.
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Tuija Kuismin
I think these are really good. They seem alive, like they're moving :) Also kind of effortless - I had a hard time figuring out twists and how much to show overlaps, yours seem settle but just enough. Great job!
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Tuija Kuismin
Well! For me, this has propaply been the most challenging assignment on this course so far. Two weeks ago it was very difficult to figure out which way my lines should curve, where's the twist, how much to show overlaps and... everything, really. When I started to see dreams about manipulating a drawn box, I knew I needed help. I returned to how to rotate a box. The Robo Bean lessons on the Figure Drawing Fundamentals course were very helpful as well. It's been a hard task, but now I feel like I'm actually getting a hang of it, so YAY! First two pictures are boxes drawn from imagination, and numbering on them are just the order I've drawn them. The three last ones are from reference. Hand drawn boxes are a bit messy, but I wanted to leave my mistakes visible and move on. Last one I did digitally. Accomplishing this feels reawarding as just managing to draw decent lines digitally. Another yay! What a great assignment.
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Tuija Kuismin
I enjoyed this excercise a lot! This showed me how much work I still have to do with just designing shapes. Lineweight is on my mind, all the time, but, as of now, it feels like I don't have enough energy left to execute it for a more finished look - after I've poured my brain on earlier stages. From this assignment I also learned that I still have the annoying tendency to get into details all too soon. It gives my drawings a certain stiffness, I think. Today, though, I'm far more able to let go of pedantry than I was a year a go, and being loose and just feeling it is a great feeling, so that's a win :D.
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Velvet Tetrault
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Tuija Kuismin
Hi Velvet! I love this. As soon as I saw this picture I started smiling, grinning, even. Something about the scene you've portrayed is really funny (in a good way!). It's that blob of a man lying on the ground all helpless, like an upside down beetle unable to turn around. In the re-do below, you've made him sad about it, and, this may well be my personal oddity, but it makes it even funnier for me. Other than that, I find your composition great, as well as the action and movement you've captured. I think your lines are a little shaky, but that's okay. It seems to me you have a very good idea of what you want to draw, and you're executing that, so... great job, keep doing this :).
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Tuija Kuismin
I spent unforgivable amounts of time wondering such things as why the blob doesn't fit inside the box. Meaning that I constantly find my focus on solving the wrong problems. At least that's how it feels, but then, I guess one can't get through a thicket without clearing the way. I'm wondering if my boxes end up looking distorted because there is too much convergence? Or because my vanishing points are missing, or misplaced? I don't know, I can't put my finger on where I go wrong. I find myself drawing a box but thinking of an ellipse, and plan to draw the box in two point perspective but end up following three point perspective guidelines, so... perhaps just a little break? :P. Fun it is, nonetheless, I love this challenge.
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Steven Wolf
Stan, when you said that this is the half way point of the course, that made me very happy, that there is going to be that much more of it. It’s been so great, and so helpful, so far. This course has been such a great investment! There were so many helpful concepts, so far, that I never fully picked up or understood from other courses, and or art lessons. Things that make everything else, that teaches concepts for line drawing, easier to manage. In that way, this course also adds value to all those other courses, for me. I just wish I would have had this course earlier because it would have saved me so much grief, and struggle. I really appreciate the thought and detail that you put into your lessons, Stan. Art teachers often explain things in ambiguous ways that leave me uncertain. But it’s clear to me that you really take the time to figure out how to explain things in the clearest way possible, and I just wanted to say how much I appreciate it. I am feeling really excited about drawing, and my art goals are feeling more attainable. I can not speak highly enough about this course! It’s already a 10 out of 10 and it’s only half way through! I absolutely love this course! Thanks for helping fill in the gaps of my drawing knowledge. Sorry it won't seem to let me post without hitting Request Critique. LOL
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Tuija Kuismin
I wholeheartedly agree :)
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@mica_
Hi everyone, can you give me some feedback on my master study please ? I really tried to think and apply all the things we have learn since the beginning of the course (drawing with energy, CSI curves, tappered strokes, line weight and all the good stuff :) ) And i find difficult to give myself an objective feedback... So if you have a feedback i would appreciate it a lot. By the way i did not respect the assignement because it took me almost 4 hours to achieve this drawing but i really really enjoyed a lot going on and on that i didn't see the time running... :)
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Tuija Kuismin
This is excellent, I think. I also think that the value we get from Master studies is in what we learn doing them, so feedback is actually secondary and it's difficult to give it constructively. You've given this time and effort, and it looks really good, so all I really can say is enjoy the proud feeling you've gotten from accomplishing this, and take that feeling to your next one :).
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Mariana Umarusman
First attempt and second attempt after watching demo
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Tuija Kuismin
Nice!
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@minervaw
What do you guys think? Can someone give me some pointers of how I can improve ? Thanks in advance. I’ve also added the second one as well which I drew after watching stan doing it. Would also love to get some ideas on it. Thanks.
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Tuija Kuismin
Good work! Since you requested some pointers, here's a couple thoughts that came to mind: I think your shapes are good, especially with the second one clearly drawn with straight lines - I myself have learned during this course that using straight lines and corners really give your drawing better form and shapes. With these two examples, I'm missing some variation with values. Perhaps you could benefit from making a value chart (you might've done that), and blocking in the planned values before filling the shapes? In any case I think these are good pears, keep at it :)
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