Lisanne
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3mo
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I'm falling a bit behind time wise, but I could spend so much time on this beautiful project! This was actually a rather quick drawing, after having scrolled past Eliza Ivanov's work a couple of times. I love the motion in her sketching and the lines. I wasn't able to capture it yet. And in all fairness, this one is a bit sloppy. I should've taken more time and let the lines flow better.
I've included my first version. Once I was 'done' I looked at the photo and I went in again to correct a couple of things. I ALWAYS place the eyes too high. Also a lot of lines did not feel organic at all, too round. Photos are the original by Eliza, my drawing before and after going in a second time.
4mo
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I'm a bit late to the game. Something held me back from starting this exercise. "Tracing, really?".
Once I began the project I immediately started learning and I also became aware of some suboptimal habits. I finished the two rhinos posted below and it occurred to me that I have a hard time letting go of the rules/guidelines. I'm so focused on Stan's words (use heavy, medium light lines), that I totally forgot about transitions or about my own ideas. The light and shadows drawing: a couple things went well, but as a whole the drawing completely lacks cohesion.
Long story short: wish I started practicing sooner. I'm gonna do another round of rhino!
Little self reminders:
- don't forget to zoom out and look at the drawing as a whole
- you have space to apply your own style or idea
- all the lines in your drawing are connected; make them look that way
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Here's my first shot at the loose sketching from observation. Could be a little more sketchy. It was hard not to lose myself in the details of the VR girl. I chose to draw with coloured pencils for a change! I thought it would look fun, but I also knew these don't erase well and so I wouldn't erase guide/sketchlines. Which for this project seemed helpful!
Lisanne
6mo
Ok, so after watching the critique video I did another sketch and really tried to focus on the energy, loose lines, confident strokes. No contours. I noticed I tend to sketch to dark, I will switch up pencils next time (used HB). Anyway, I drew these directly after each other and the second definitely came out better already!
I learn a ton from these critique video every single time. I go in with a feeling I did well, only to find out I completely missed the point of the project. Back to the drawing table!
So I redraw one of the photos taking into consideration the points in the video. One of my mistakes was that I focused a lot on the contour and I tried to do perfect lines. Also, I stop worrying about proportions and focused in the connections (I did a few mistakes with the arms but I'm still satisfied with the result)
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I got round to doing these late, but I've not watched the demo video yet. Promise :)
Drawing that hand was hard! I found I had to draw several iterations to really find it, or at least come close to finding it. I think it's actually worth doing these exercises several times to really benefit from them, and build that muscle memory and hand eye coordination.
I also spent a lot of time looking for connecting lines and big shapes, which is something I've learnt from life drawing recently.
Finally I added a variation of the penguin, just because I was having fun. I also drew a few of my own hand, as I still wasn't satisfied with my hand drawing and to be honest drawing from life is easier than drawing from reference.
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First attempt with these big horn sheep (pictures from Pinterest). Planning another session to dive into the shapes a little further! I first started with loosely copying the photos , then I tried to explore with proportions a bit by exaggerating the snout and eyes. I really thought this was a fun project! And I feel like I'm not done. This sheep still needs a little bit more personality.
7mo
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Yesterday I gave the level 2 projects a go as well. I'm happy about the camel and it's happy face, but I felt a little uncertain and 'pecky' with the skull. I decided to color in the red lines to be able to see what I was doing in the vertebrae. I think I ended up including too many details for a line work practice.
6mo
And here is my second attempt! I tried to really let go of the details for the skull. I also forced myself to be quicker with these. Not satisfied with my strokes yet, I don't think they look smooth or confident, but it's a work in progress.
7mo
shoes 1 and 2 before watching video. I was afraid I didn't simplify the forms enough.
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7mo
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Another attempt at line simplification. All critiques are welcome!
7mo
I really like how flowy your lines are and the way you used a box to envision the snout of the little creature (cute btw). I think you could perhaps revise the proportions of your drawing a little, I struggle with this too. I try to hack my way out of this by comparing positioning. For example, the right side of the head is actually at a similar point as the most curved out part of the neck on the right side. Meaning that the line actually dents inward ' under' the head, before coming back to the position right under the right side of the head. Does that make sense? Good luck!
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7mo
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I really felt that 'pecking' comment that was made in the video. Every once in a while I would catch myself doing it. Thanks for making me aware of this Stan!
I practiced with the photos of the snail and the boots. What a struggle, those laces!
To anyone scrolling by, feel free to give me some feedback.
7mo
I practiced fruit simplification some more before moving on to line work!
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8mo
These are my first and second attempt, with the second portrait in steps as well. I found it really hard to let go of looking at the photo as a face full of details. I even had to go back and erase a bunch, because I started to draw in detailed eyebrows and eyes, but then backed up a little to really just focus on drawing the shadow shapes. In the end, I found that my 4B and new 6B were too close in value. All in all, interesting process and rethinking. Not sure if I like my first or second portrait best, but definitely opened my eyes to the process of looking at the values differently. Thanks for the demo!
8mo
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Started just today, trying to catch up with the course the upcoming weeks! Due to quarantaine I'm stuck at home with just a couple supplies - but gave it a try and doodle. Gonna get some new gear once I'm allowed and test everything out once again! I never knew about the standard sharpener to be considered shit.. I also never realised one of the steps is for the wood and one for the graphite! These are the little things I didn't even expect to learn.. :)