Finished colour pages
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Serena Marenco
A couple of months ago I asked you for help with the composition of some pages. Thank you very much, the result was far beyond my expectations. Over the next few days I will bore you with new storyboards since your help with these pages has been so valuable and useful! Thank you very much, it's nice to have a community to ask for advice! <3
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Sketcher Ameya
Splendid Serena !
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Serena Marenco
Thank you! :)
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squeen
I just noticed almost of your figures are looking to the right!
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Serena Marenco
Yes, it is required in the script.
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decemberg
That is beautiful.
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Yiming Wu
Lovely! Are these continuous or segmented? To me the colour doesn't bridge very naturally between image 2 and 3 but maybe there's more stuff in-between XD. Is this a web comic or something?
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Serena Marenco
Yes, it is a flashback. Usually in flashbacks I make the edges of the vignettes blurred rather than defined (these are pages 135 to 142). Since I don't write the script I don't have the power to add or remove pages, sometimes I can negotiate some changes but the writer has very clear ideas ^^; It is a webcomic, it is on different platforms such as Webtoon and Tapas. I've never done comics before so I'm learning as I go along. ^^;
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Joakim lof
These look great! I really like how we're woven into the story in the first page with the establishing shots, and I absolutely love the build-up in the last 3 pages where the horse comes back up and the overall paintings are beautiful. Thinking about what @Yiming Wu said - perhaps adding another page between 2 and 3 with some establishing shots for the flashback and starting with a panel from the present would help visually strengthen the connection?
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Serena Marenco
I agree, but the writer had other ideas. ^^;
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Charline B.R.
Great result here ! Really like the shift in colors and the different scene intensity ! Really nice !
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Serena Marenco
Thank you ^___^
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Sonja Müller
They turned out great, congratulations :)
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Serena Marenco
Thanks ^^
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