Finished colour pages
A couple of months ago I asked you for help with the composition of some pages. Thank you very much, the result was far beyond my expectations. Over the next few days I will bore you with new storyboards since your help with these pages has been so valuable and useful! Thank you very much, it's nice to have a community to ask for advice! <3
These look great! I really like how we're woven into the story in the first page with the establishing shots, and I absolutely love the build-up in the last 3 pages where the horse comes back up and the overall paintings are beautiful. Thinking about what @Yiming Wu said - perhaps adding another page between 2 and 3 with some establishing shots for the flashback and starting with a panel from the present would help visually strengthen the connection?
Lovely! Are these continuous or segmented? To me the colour doesn't bridge very naturally between image 2 and 3 but maybe there's more stuff in-between XD. Is this a web comic or something?
Great result here ! Really like the shift in colors and the different scene intensity ! Really nice !