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8mo
Second attempt at the pear.Tried to add more tone changes and to be a little darker(scared to go dark for some reason.) Thank you for any feedback.
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8mo
Nice! I think you could use another transitional tone. Right now, the harsh separation makes the bottom left bulge look like it's jutting out too far, a transitional tone will help smooth that out a bit, and also the reflected light in the shadows is too light of a tone on yours currently. Hope that helps!
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8mo
Awesome. Thank you for the feed back. O will apply these notes and try it again.
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Pear Project Feedback8mo
Finished my first project and looking for feedback. I might have originally posted in the wrong section so I apologize if this is a double post.
I turn 47 this year and decided to attempt to learn to draw. It is pretty humbling but also exciting.
