Daniel Lucas Nizari
Daniel Lucas Nizari
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Daniel Lucas Nizari
I find it hard to determine the first three lines when determining an direction. Are there some cool tricks to remember how to “steer” my arrow in the right direction with my box?
Rachel Dawn Owens
These look great! It looks like you’re understanding it. I found it easiest to start with a line for the arrow direction and building from there. Hope this helps
Daniel Lucas Nizari
I do consider myself “level 1”, but I did both in around 10 minutes. infeel I struggle most with the terminator-to-light value relations. I feel more confident with “the dark side”
Osagumwenro Igiehon
They look great! If you did these in 10, minutes then maybe you’d benefit from going a bit slower?
Rafael
I would love some feedback, i feel like im having trouble with the more stiff poses (especially first 2) and maybe a bit with proportions Have attached my gestures for the images given, i havent attached the other ones ive done because there might be issues with copyright :)
Daniel Lucas Nizari
I’m far from pro, but hopefully can provide some insight. 1 looks quite good! 2 looks like he’s floating with one food so looks less credible. 3 looks good but the gab in the right arm and the strong line weight distracts the flow. 4 the lines at the hip are too far apart so it breaks the flow. 5 a proportion error for the left leg, but mainly the 2 contour lines on the back are to horizontal straight, breaking flow.
Daniel Lucas Nizari
Her the 10 from imagination! Was surprised at the result. It’s way more playful without reference! Great inspirational exercise
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2mo
love the whimsical nature in the first and the last one ...
Daniel Lucas Nizari
Here part 1: drawing from masters. Especially with arms and legs I quickly feel “I miss a line” for it it to make sense…but the I got a cone as an arm or leg and it feels wrong as well…
Daniel Lucas Nizari
With and without color multiple angles
Daniel Lucas Nizari
Here my assignment! Although is quite doable, I feel I miss a big step between this, and keeping the proportions when the person is in a pose.
Daniel Lucas Nizari
Especially loved your inside on sped-up drawings. Indeed that’s a dangerous mind-twist that can demotivate
@jaejaelearning
As someone who hurt my wrist pushing to draw 'faster' and lost 4 years to a slow recovery that's ongoing even now, it makes my stomach twist and ache when fellow artists lament how slowly they create as though it is such a bad thing. Not only a demotivating mindset, but one that can cause physical damage to your most valuable tool: your body. :(
Daniel Lucas Nizari
Dear Stan, first off congrats on the family expansion. Second, I want to see more of your student work! How long have you been drawing at that time? I’ve only been drawing for 5 years (always thought I was not artistic), I do see progress, but am not near your student-level 😅
Daniel Lucas Nizari
I’ve got to do admit this was a confronting assignment I was not looking forward to. Drawing difficult things feels like a mental internal struggle of insecurity. But I’m proud. I at least did the bare minimum. side question: some people have the label “Help wanted” , but how can you add that?
Rachel Dawn Owens
It looks like you’re getting it. Keep drawing more like this and it will get easier. The only thing I notice here is minor. The back looks a little too round. I think it would look more dimensional if you flattened the back plane little bit. and to post with the ‘asked for help’ sign, just click the ‘post as help request’ checkbox when you post. It can be buggy at times and not show up. You can also tag me or @Melanie Scearce. We are Proko Community Critiquers. Here to help the students.
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