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Max
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I used a HB woodless pencil for both drawings.
I didn't watched the demo or critic videos before doing the exercise.
I'm really happy with the result, since Im was off of drawing from past 5 months, I thought it would has been harder.
The points where I could improve are :
1. Avoid perfectionism since I redo a lot of lines for cleaness;
2. I used construction lines near the end of my drawings everytime I spotted big differences with the references, I should start by that first;
3. Take more time to watch and process the whole reference before putting the pencil down to avoid tunnel vision.
I bought the red pencil you suggested that Disney animators use. I really enjoy using them.
Max
1yr
Awesome ! By the way, could you please give me the reference of this pencil ? I don't find the suggestion.
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1yr
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Here's the snail drawing of my friend Alex.
1yr
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I didn't had the time to do captain skull, at least here is my drawing of the camel.
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1yr
I posted my drawing in the comments section. I was so sad when Proko said he was going to scroll throught the assignments section. But it was useful anyway x)
1yr
Hoping it's not too late to be in the critics video. the other fruit is from my friend Alex (apple and pear2)
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2yr
Here is my pear ! Critics are welcome ^^
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2yr
I did my best to simply it as much as I could and It gave me mad anxiety but I pulled through xD. Please critiques are more than welcome, I am here to learn so be mean.
Edit: I forgot that shadow and I am sad but I have done tones of those and will be sure to do it next time ;-;
2yr
In itself, its not a bad thing i guess but the brush is too different between the "Light Form Shadow" and the rest of the pear. Make it uniform so that it looks harmonious. Plus, your "Reflected Ligth" and "Core Shadow" have the same value. Make the "Reflected Light" lighter. Apart form that, it is a good pear in general, i like the shape and you well captured the top one.
2yr
Hi! I just draw this. I would appreciate some feedback
2yr
The bottom of ur drawing is a little bit off at the left corner. Try to align it with the bottom right corner. Plus, the width at the bottom is slightly little compared to the top one (it make kind of a V or W shape form). Your one is more cylindrical (same width at top and bottom). Plus, the top of the bell pepper (reference) is aligned with the stem. For yours: the top of the bell pepper is a little higher than the stem. Finally, the shadow on the front of the bell pepper is not uniform: some parts are lighter than others. I suggest you make these parts darker to make it uniform. Apart from that, your drawing is good: I like the general shape and the cast shadow.
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