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First attempt before watching Demo. Apologies for the numbering being out of sequence on the pictures. I use an A3 sketch book and I can't take a picture of the whole page at once. Also I draw to lightly. Great challenge, I think I'm starting to get the idea but, as always, I will practice more after I watch the demo video!
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Robert
good stuff. I skimmed through it and noticed a few things instantly - Some of your edges don't converge (1,2,7,11) - I noticed that when you draw the bottom plane of a box, you tend to converge your line very strong (15, 17, 12) which does not align with the other 2 lines converging - Try to capture the width-to-height relationship of the head in your box. Sometimes I feel like you just drew the box without considering the height and width (3, 19) If you want me to draw over them just shoot me a message. I am not an expert by any means but if it helps you I am glad to assist
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Robert
First few attempts. Not in a specific order. Did these before watching the demo. I basically drew the box and then tried to fit in the head into the box. Approaching it like this felt weird. I missed a lot of important landmarks. Also I didn't really pay attention to the line weight. I was focused on placing the features in the box. Got a few questions: How do you determine the centre line of the head? It's not always the centre of the box from my observation. Do I have to eyeball it or is there a way to determine it? How do you use line weight on a portrait? Generally I would darken the facial features and sharp edges close to the head. Number 10: In the ref the eyes have a different angle than the eyebrows. Am I tripping or is that really the case. I thought that nose, brows, eyes and mouth angle should all align Number 15: The angle of the mouth is different from nose and brows. How do I draw this without breaking the perspective?
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Robert
I saw it in the critique a few times. Is the center line of the box the center line of the face? I saw a few references where you could clearly see that one side of the front plane appears to be bigger than the other side.
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Robert
Level 1 second try. definetely saw an improvement after watching the demo. If you see anything wrong with the boxes, I'd appreciate the feedback
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Robert
Level 1 first try. I realized that the center line of the box is not the center line of the head. also I have to keep foreshortening in mind when placing the lines for the nose and brow. I am aware that a lot of these boxes are not correct. One question I still do have: how do you determine the angle of the top/bottom plane of the head or how much of it is showing. I have a hard time to judge it
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@crowlle
i tryed a few quick things
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Robert
Looks sick. When I did this and watched Stan's demo he mentioned that you don't have to draw exactly the geometrical shapes when you want to draw something more square, cicular or triangular. The envelope of the shape should represent a circle,triangle,rectangle but the shape itself doesn't necessarily need to be. Otherwise it looks great
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Robert
I have 0.5mm mechanical pencils. Is it worth it to get me some 0.7mm and 1mm mechanical pencils. What's the difference aside from the lead width. Is the size difference significant enough to justify the investment?
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@crowlle
i drew this as i got inspired by a creator here who made a few pic ideas post the credit to the idea goes to @Vincent Lagacé
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Robert
really love the line weight on this one. Shapes look great too. This definetely not your first time drawing
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Chris
Not a whole lot going on here, for the life of me I couldn’t figure out what to add to the room.
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Robert
I'd personally pick a more extreme angle. Everything is placed on level with the vanishing point so you don't actually see a lot of the 3d form. Move the vanishing point to the left or right, so you can practive 1 point perspective better
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May Berry
My line quality and accuracy has gotten better. Although I'm struggling to draw doors and windows on the side walls. Still not having fun with this project. It's mostly because my visual library for indoor rooms is pretty low, so I end up drawing the same thing over and over. I will do some 1 point perspective draw alongs and references.
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Robert
The bench looks off. Try to make your horizontals the same
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William Mclean
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Robert
I cannot find the vanishing point. Mark it on the page. you need to trace straight lines from the VP to your boxes
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Robert
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Robert
These are the level ones I did. I fucked up the horizontals and verticals
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Robert
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Level 2 here we go. Overhand grip and 10mins. I actually like some of those I did. How do I make women not look like men when I quicksketch. I noticed it several times but I can't put my finger on it Any feedback would be appreciated
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Siv Nilsen
I really love how thorough rhythms have been explained in this section. I was struggling to really comprehend the concept in the past. So here are my level 1 rhythms. Took it very slow at first and I think naturally my timings went from about 18 minutes in the beginning and down to about 10 as I practiced. Line quality is also an issue I feel as it can get messy trying to place the lines in the right place.
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Robert
Clean lines I like it. I would go for more searching line though. Imo you seem to follow the contour to much. try to see the connections between the different body parts. Your drawings look very structural. To me they feel disconnected
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Robert
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Second round. Still bad usage of line weight. gave myself a time limit of 5 minutes. I needed more than 5 min just to finish the pose on some of these. proportions are sometimes off but I don't hate every single pose I did
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Robert
really struggled with 20-24. Maybe because the nudity is censored and I cannot really check for the rhythms
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@jensdawg
Level 1 submission.
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Robert
great sink
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Robert
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First batch. I tried gesture drawing/quick sketch once and I really disliked it but everyone said that it is important to improve. I struggled through it. I went randomly through the provided refs and used other ones as well. I got a few things I don't like/can improve upon: -> No time limit. I stopped after I thought I was done - Line weight is not deliberate. looks more like I am sketching. I don't really how to distribute the line weight that it makes sense. I know that you can do hierarchy, depth and form and light and shadow. The thing that would make most sense to me is depth and form so basically when overlaps occur - Proportions are incorrect. Have a hard time eyeballing - I think that I focused too much on the details/segments of the body and not on the connections If you have anything to add, I'd appreciate it
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Robert
max 20 files so here is the last one
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Mariyam Khaidarova
First batch! It was a struggle but a fun one. Still getting the hang of the overhand grip and just charcoal, so eh, these are messy. And so are my white kitchen table, my hands, and my slippers. Spent ~20-30 min on each. Would appreciate your feedback! :)
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Robert
these look great. just a beginner so I can't really give you any critique on it. By simply looking I feel like the upper body in 5 and 6 don't really support the gesture as good as in your previous ones
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Robert
Looks to me like you focused more on the contour and not on the gesture. Go through the e-book and find rhythms to connect all the body parts. Stan demonstrates it in his demo very well
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