Is the final drawing supposed to be drawn on the another tracing paper over the abstraction drawing which I drew on the tracing paper?

I want to have my thumb sketch critique but I don't know how to post it. I don't have a smart phone and Facebook either. I practice them with Hillary photos. I'll practice them continue.

I'm confused. Do I have to focus image and character than likeness?

Can you tell me brand names of pencil and pen and other material you use?

I think Gene Wilder's shape of face wider and shorter. I'm confused...