Giuliano Lo Bartolo
Giuliano Lo Bartolo
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Giuliano Lo Bartolo
The shapes and colors look all right for me. But what I would do ist to get rid of all these little white spots that shine through so it doesn't look as sketchy and could help to convey realism. Sincerely, Giuliano
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Giuliano Lo Bartolo
I had some ink to spare so I used it to make this quick "watercolor" of a skull :)
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Giuliano Lo Bartolo
1. Do you know what's happening? Yes definitely. It was really easy to read for me. That you added no dialogue is not a problem at all. The kind of comic you tried is its own category of pictorial story, so its ok :) 2. Is it boring? Definitely not, its really funny. On the composition: Its nice to see that not every panel is the same. But I would say, try that all panels are in the same area. You should look for a "border" were all panels stop. Looks cleaner 3. Do you have any emotional reaction looking through it? I found it mostly funny but it got definitely a creepy vibe to it PS. Criticism is definitely not there for hurting someones feeling! And dont expect to hear that you suck. We are all learners here so "sucking" is just the part of the learning process. Also this kind of negative feeling doesnt let you look good and even makes you feel worse. Hope I didnt get too personal. Sincerely, Giuliano
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Pau Luna
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Looking for feedback and critics. Thank you
DAY 14
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Giuliano Lo Bartolo
Hi, first of all: Its a very nice sketch! But there are some flaws in anatomy and perspective (dont worry its not something utterly serious). Your perspective with the neck and the muscles that attach to the clavicle doesnt match the rotation of the torso. The clavicles point to the viewer, while the torso points to the right side. Its not much, but the right arm is a bit too large compared to the other arm. And to the horns in the hair: They dont attach to the head on the same point if thats what you were after, also they dont quite have the same hight. Hope I wasnt too nitpicky and hope I could help :) Sincerely, Giuliano
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Giuliano Lo Bartolo
I think it could be the part of the trapezius muscle that attaches to the scapula. It could look that weird, because the scapula pokes out and pushes this part to look that way. But I'm really not sure. Hope this helps anyway ;)
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krioukovm
Hello! Here is my entry for the challenge ))
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Giuliano Lo Bartolo
Amazing!
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Ankit Kumar
Hi this is my artwork for the challenge.... a deep sea samurai. Hope you all like it😊
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Giuliano Lo Bartolo
Love it. Looks very nice :)
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Nastenka Alava
Here is my take on the challenge! It was a lot of fun!
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Giuliano Lo Bartolo
Beautiful sketch
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sergio guillen
Hello everyone!  This is my post apocalyptic motolemur, wearing the armour of a dead giant bettle for protection, and just trying to survive…  Main references were of course the Beetle, the Lemur, and the Motorcycle, but there’s a bit of medieval armour too, and for the pants, jacket and shoes I used the horse faced fellows playing the accordion.
Post apocalyptic Moto Lemur
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Giuliano Lo Bartolo
awesome how you sketched the bike! Its funny how you used the beetle as a jacket. Awesome drawing :)
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Michael Jap
Land of The Great Rapiers
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Giuliano Lo Bartolo
really cool idea to use the swords as giant statues in the landspace. Looks very nice!
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Anna Schier
Her name is Minokampos (kampos means sea monster in ancient Greek). She is the younger sister of Minotaur. Her biggest passion is playing music, however playing certain instruments can prove to be rather tough, when you have the head of a seahorse. She has been pondering how to play the trumpet for several days already and so far has had no luck. References used - seahorse, trumpet, rock on seashore, musicians with horse masks.
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Giuliano Lo Bartolo
really nice sketch! i like the color and the shading!
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Giuliano Lo Bartolo
Hello everyone! For this challenge I used the beeeater as a base. with it I tried different things and throughout the process I settled with a retired birdsoldier. A reference for a past war is the lost wing and the armorstand in the background. Furthermore I added the lemur as a pet sitting on his shoulder and the flower as an umbrella. The cloth around the waist is referenced from the greek statue. (You can check out the process on my Instagram if you like) I'm very happy for any kind of feedback! Have a nice day and good luck for this challenge everyone :)
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Sylvain Ng
Current progress for today :)
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Giuliano Lo Bartolo
Awesome scene!!!
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miguelesp
Ok so these ones are the sketches I made for the Proko Reference Bash challenge. I just limited myself to 3 photos, photobashed them together, and drew on top of them. Was a fun exercise to do! Although I personally like the mechanized one a lot (and I did already a value sketch of it), I'm curious to see which of the three sketches do you think is the most interesting?
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Giuliano Lo Bartolo
cool idea using the monument as armor!
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Pedro Adario
Hello to everyone! First time on this challenge. Always wanted to draw a flying lemur. So this was the best opportunity... I had lots of fun with this one. Ink on paper and digitally colored. Hope you all like it!
Flying Lemur
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Flying Lemur inking
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Giuliano Lo Bartolo
really cool combination!
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