I'm Learning How to Tell a Story
Hello. Here are two pages I drew that I'd like to share and get feedback on. I'll take any critiques you may have for me. Don't worry about hurting my feelings, I work in the service industry so I already hate everyone and am bracing for the worst. But if you don't immediately know what to say, you can answer a few questions I have about the art: 1. Do you know what's happening? There's no dialogue on purpose. I want the frames themselves to be enough to tell the story. 2. Is it boring? I did what I could to vary the angles of each shot. I just finished watching David Finch's video on dynamic composition so I had that in mind. 3. Do you have any emotional reaction looking through it? I was trying to make the end feel both funny and creepy. Did I pull it off for you? Did you instead get bored and jump right down to the comments to let me know I suck? That's cool too. I need to know so that I can get better.