Critique - 4 Step Method
Critique - 4 Step Method
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Critique - 4 Step Method
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@csen
Thanks so much for the detailed critique! You mentioned a couple of times that the tilt line and the line for the front of the face should be parallel, same for the brow / chin line. Doesn't that break perspective / foreshortening? And especially for the side of the face, I would expect it to have to go inwards, as the chin is more narrow than the brow.
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COMMENTS
Michael Hampton
I got a ton of great submissions for the 4 Step Method project! In this critique, I’ll review some of the more common mistakes, which include jaw length, brow line placement, and neck connections.
Leaf Leau
26d
Can someone clarify what the shape of the underplane of the chin is? What I seem to be gathering from the demonstrations in this video is that it depends on the angle of the head, but I still find myself confused since it varies so much from either an ellipse, a square, or a triangle or triangular like shape.
Michael Hampton
It can be any shape that makes sense but I find that an ellipse is easiest and can be related to the same ellipse of the brown to ear. As more advanced shape might be a trapezoid like shape to catch the more rigid angles of the jaw and chin.
lukas allenbaugh
Here are some studies from the first part, feedback welcome.
@leighvee
1mo
Can somebody please explain to me how to figure out the tilt correctly? For example in Critique 5, I viewed the tilt completely opposite angle from what the "right" answer apparently is. What are the markers I can use to figure out the tilt in more difficult angles?
Michael Hampton
Finding tilts are tough. I think using your pencil to sight and match the head lean can be a helpful tool though.
Bruno Carreiro
@Michael Hampton What software do you use to create drawings on your tablet? I'm planning to buy an Android tablet to practice drawing more easily.
Michael Hampton
I've only used photoshop.
Mario Ulloa
Followed along while listening
Ash
2mo
Great explorations! You have a good understanding of what's going on under the chin. That part is difficult!
Anthony Bautista
This was a fun assignment. I was trying to stay loose and really tried to see the ellipses. Some felt strange to draw out, but I believe it should get easier as I progress through the class. Thank you for any feedback. I numbered them, sorry if they uploaded in the wrong order.
@stefyart
6mo
Here are my assignments. Previously, I studied how to draw a portrait using the Loomis method, which I felt quite comfortable with, but I still made some mistakes that appeared later in the drawing and forced me to work hard to correct them. The Michael method is slightly different and easy to follow, so I hope it will help me correct the mistakes I have been making up until now.
Tyler Hernandez
Here are all my practice drawings with some corrections as I drew along with the critique. I think I struggle most with communicating the underside of the jaw. All feedback is much appreciated!
Colleen Daley
i need more demo's, lots more demo's, thanks
laura mcgann
Hello, I am trying really hard to understand the head tilt; when the head is angled and tilted the results I see are not the same as how you are drawing it and I don't know if I am understanding this incorrectly. For example: at 16:29 in the critique video, I downloaded the picture and drew the lines over his face. The angles that I drew over his face are different than the angles you drew in your example. What markers are best to use to understand the tilt? I read in a previous comment that you said follow the lines of the features. Is this what you suggest? If so the feature line at this marker does not line up with the drawing. There are other examples of this, I am just pointing it out so I can figure out what is the best way to determine the tilt. Another example is at 19:26. Please help me understand the best way to understand the best reference for the tilt line. thank you - Laura
Michael Hampton
Hey Laura, I'm just looking for a 2d lean that's close. It certainly doesn't need to be exact. You could just as easily hold up your pencil to the head and do your best to match the angle. If you want to try using the symmetry line of the face that might help as well.
@jiwingka
7mo
I’m still trying to understand the skull structure and how to simplify the forms. I’m not sure if I did it right, especially the front and back view with the head tilted down — that really confused me 😵‍💫
Jonatan
9mo
Followed a long the video, grabbed the reference on screen, and did my own take before the solution by Michael Hampton was shown, the redlines are corrections after seeing the solution, feedback is appreciated.
Michael Hampton
Nice work!
rhea
1yr
what do you think about necks? I kinda fell that i haven't understood completly the S and C lines rule
Isaiah
1yr
@charliecasselart
Need more practice!!!
Josh Fiddler
Super helpful to see other's stuff and know a) I'm doing alright and b) where my challenges lie: form intersections, and getting the under-planes of the jaw properly positioned. I'd add also getting that initial ball right. Time to refine!
Bill Lear
1yr
Joined a few days ago. Great content @Michael Hampton ! Hoping for feedback on these four 4-step images, particularly wrt perspective. Thanks!
Michael Hampton
Looking good! Keep at it. I think watching the critique video will help fine tune what you're up to.
Brian Judy
1yr
I think I am starting to understand these up angles now! I posted some practice. Wondering if you think I'm understanding these chin plains okay now? @Michael Hampton or if its okay to move on at this level of understanding... This course is so fantastic and so much thoughtful work has been put into it!
Michael Hampton
Looking good! Yep, time to move on.
Brian Judy
1yr
ideally, should the line angle of the neck we are thinking be the "overall" feel of the neck, or following the stretch, pinch, or something else? @Michael Hampton
Michael Hampton
And average assessment of the necks lean side to side as one line.
@nandogonzalez
@Michael Hampton The major axis of the ellipse has to be complete perpendicular to the tilt line? Thanks
@nandogonzalez
Great thanks!
Michael Hampton
Yes.
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