Work In progress… what is going wrong?
4yr

RItesh Dhande
Where is this painting going wrong??
good job so far!
I think everything is very saturated and i would like to see some "grey" areas to emphasize focal points. However that can also be a matter of taste.
Maybe more harder edges would help.
Keep it up!
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4yr
Hey Rltesh, this is a really good start to a really strong impressionistic painting.
I'd say your drawing is fine, but the silhouette of her form, and the even lighting really hold the painting back. I think if you were to zoom out a bit and try to do something to make her silhouette more feminine, as well as pushing more dramatic lighting it would do a lot for the image.
Good luck!
what do you think is going wrong? apparently you have something in mind which seems not to be okay....would be a good start to tell us.