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3yr
@zms
The second attempt of a drawing I did a few days ago. I'm entirely happy with how it came out, but it was better than I expected. I think I'm going to study a bit of composition in the next few months and hopefully get more used to drawing digitally. What do you think?
3yr
The graphic element in the back is much more appropriate and subtle, does a good job of drawing attention to the point of action which is the head and weapon. The detailing in the boot is great but I think it does dominate too much of the picture frame and distracts from the action above because it is brighter and shinier than the helmet. Reducing the thickness of the boot and darkening the values in that area might address this. Other than that very nice work!
3yr
REGARDING COMPOSITION, IT IS NOT ADVISABLE FOR THE FEET STEPPING ON THE EDGE OF THE BLADE. NICE WORK.
@zms
3yr
lol thanks. Now that you've mentioned it, I can't unsee it
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3yr
Wow!! That is a lot of improvement!! Nice job! I think the drawing turned out great! Love the pose as well!
3yr
I love the pose, it really conveys who the character is! I notice how you thinned the lines on shoes and I think that is a great detail, you could vary the outer lines even more but that can also be more of a stylistic choice and not entirely necessary.
I'm really excited to see how much you improve zms, it looks great so far.
3yr
Here's a link to the first: https://www.proko.com/community/topics/critique-would-be-appreciated
