Toxic Mushroom Designs Critique
6mo
David Ferencik
Hey, im an aspiring concept designer.
Im looking for feedback on my latest designs for a personal project i'm working one. Please be as honest and brutal as possible.
2mo
Hey there,
As an aspiring concept designer, seeking honest and constructive feedback is a commendable approach! I'd be more than happy to review your latest designs for your personal project. Rest assured, I'll provide you with honest and detailed feedback to help you improve and refine your work. Feel free to share your designs, and let's get started on the feedback process. Keep up the great work, and I'm excited to see your creativity in action!
ntrigue
15d
I do like your concept drawings, I like that you have scaled them to a human form, I would have to agree with Rebecca and Shelvs; they look realistic, but don’t really convey danger… other than size. (I wouldn’t want to get close to them). Very nice though. I can’t wait to see your changes.
6mo
How in the world did you make them look so real? They look like photographs! Are they 3d models?
6mo
Hi, indeed it is 3D (made in blender) using procedural textures, geomtetry nodes and sculpting :)
6mo
Cool concept. The only thing I will say is while they look realistic, and it’s probably what a toxic mushroom will look like in real life. However when designing creatures it’s about giving people clues, and this ones don’t convey danger, or toxicity.
you can use triangle shaped things ( pointy things) , colors: purple, green, fluorescent, and even mechanical repeated patterns that don’t usually happen in reality to convey danger.
6mo
Honestly this is some great advice, thankyou so much for taking the time. And thanks for the sketch, your awesome :)
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